Plutonium vs Spite
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-19-04 at 06:56 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Plutonium has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-04 06:57 PM.

Spite has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-04 07:00 PM.

Lets see how far Pluto goes when I drop him in the tropics,
this a BATTLE? i’ll choke your raps blue so mc’s can COP it
aight...Let me start ripPIN you like important topics
Stop it and leave this Bold Fight now
they wont even read your verse, just Scroll Right down
The hard type? Yeah right You just type hard, fool your mine
because of weak rappers like you, ja rule got signed
My artillery will dance to the end while I watch biters drop
stab your arteries with a cancerous pen and give you writer’s block
Die on your life Breath and Sigh on the sight of spite being high as a kite
there’s a reason you type, cause like miss America winners, you cry on the mic
Your just the average hater on some drastic shit, who married a plastic bitch
was still glad he ate her, only boobies you see is on your calculator
hold up why lag this when the best drop and you cant even PRESS STOP
blast your chest off this phony is too lonely
so like 'music in empty bottles' you can blow me
Show me you Lost your hope after you dropped the soap that filled the shelve
now he’ll reenact Eddie in the movie, when Pluto kills himself
Since when do you flow freely Trust you cant see me,
kinda like the sig. flip you the BIRD cause I murdered this kiwi

I'm wack.......

said his word are weapons...hit me with a dictionary?
the kid coming up to hit me or is he playing pictionary?
not just one...my punch is phatter than 20 biggie's fist
you can "run wild" but "nature's call" still leave you "pissed"
you're wasting your time where you could be practising
can disguise as "pac's CV" but still be "Reported Missing"
who want to battle you with writtens...when you're "Spit e"n
kid wants a loss...he's forgetting dreams are fantasies
attacking in mist...even sprites can destroy your livers
you can rhyme doctor with hector...but still can't deliver

Voted For: Spite

man wuz that shit awesome....
Show me you Lost your hope after you dropped the soap that filled the shelve
now he’ll reenact Eddie in the movie, when Pluto kills himself
Since when do you flow freely Trust you cant see me,
kinda like the sig. flip you the BIRD cause I murdered this kiwi
^^^that wuz THE MOST PHATTEST punchline ive seen damn, man spite u had sum awesome punches and i mean it but still cud improve, i voted 4 u only becuz of that,man but ur vocab needz wrk like;Die on your life Breath and Sigh on the sight of spite being high as a kite
^^^ that line is crap a 4/10 no offence but ur punchez r outta this wrld, return the favor

Voted For: Spite

aight,
Plutonium, ya verse was okay...but your punches were lackin, they didnt hit hard enough...u didnt have any personals or multies either...the only thing that stood out as bein good was the structure...keep elevatin...

Spite, def not a bad verse...u didnt seem to have personals either but u had multis n your punches were a lil mo creative...ya structure coulda used some work, but overall u had good consistency....

V/ Spite, fo mo overall creativity

uppin for votes

This was feedback posted for Plutonium
 

lol, cheching polls..

lol, uppin............................................

uh uppin! lets get some votes, we'll return the favour god damnit. honest votes only.

Voted For: Plutonium

you took this...this was a wack battle but plutonium merked u..lol his flow was way better and so was his structure it atleast was on Point.....LOL......dope shit fam......

Voted For: Plutonium

plutonium gets this with more consisten rhetoric... spite had a choppy delivery and set up... punches dragged... verse lacked substance... i like plutoniums set up, though some elevation is needed.. i thought this was a good battle none the less.

good luck to you both

return the favor

Voted For: Spite

thats some sick shit spite
nice double rhymes specially
nice flow, structure, punches and everything else
8.5/10

pluto i think u can even admit u lost this
ur rhymes were alright tho
6/10

my vote goes to spite

Voted For: Spite

yo first let me say i use to be on here a year or two ago and thought i was top shit until i got killed by a great lyricist now im back and better had to take time off but yea im back and this is the first battle since ive been back that was any good.

spite has obviously a better lyrical talent overall ryming "lonley with blow me" "shelve and himself" and is talent and thats what i know now and thats wat wins also killer hits liked the ja line and miss america line and the "pluto kills himself" line was good usage of what you know.

plut not so much vocab from you simple "dict...with pict...."
"liver and deliver" and against some like spit you lose, keep practicing.
goes to spit.