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-   -   Week 5 (1-0) Az-ace Vs (1-0) Dariel Sharium (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=15567)

Dariel Shariem 07-01-02 10:34 AM

signin in...

az-ace 07-02-02 03:21 PM

......yo az in this bitch!

Massive 07-02-02 03:21 PM

AZ-ACE not to sure if your bright,but you do not have to sign up every damn week for a battle..if you sign out ..you would have too..makes sence dont it..

Dariel Shariem 07-02-02 09:55 PM

thats just jokes...

az-ace 07-05-02 04:48 AM

Yo son….
I’m a lyrical addict and your just a fanatic, so I guess I’ll hang you in the attic//
This isn’t diplomatic… so I’ll use my automatic and go frantic and bring the panic//
Shoot you hard… so you could go down like the titanic//
I’ll: drown you like atlantics- knock you out of the atlas//
I’ll be a revolutionist turn communist and so I’ll manifest my hatred by putting 20 rounds in your chest//
so son check your roll cause I only involve into a psycho killer gone out of control//
Watch my hatred unfold…and the terror grow//
...to the ones you cherish will perish- cause I’ll release the beast and lyrically feats//
and increase to leave you decease and then left to be rape by a catholic priest//
As I cut your life supplied- poke your eyes-//
make you a thorn crown, so you could be crucify//
So realize, that in front of your eyes I’ll materialize- cut your tongue for all them lies//

Dariel Shariem 07-06-02 01:29 AM

this kid is comin up on his first lose like a dropping toss, i rap multies like mazes, this kid is 'bound to get lost'/
this battle is like 'points bets', this kid aint got tha right team, a large lose is the cost/
quickly keying in the win to make you queerly step to me, acting like ya want to me drop my dick/
for you, i aint droppin shit, buhin but this shit, cause i got him dropped like bad habbits/
he's cutin phone cords while he trys to call in his verse, so he can try and 'be off the hook'/
i'm in the library, kicken the shit outta him, cause he needs intellegence, so i'm makin this kid 'hit the books'/
ya act like you 'Az-A-ACE', but you aint gonna whin shit when i am da 'Trumph'/(and english card game)
even if i was to take ya mic and hit ya in the lungs, ya still couldnt produce that extra 'umph'/(the sound when hit)
ya act like you got punchs in, but this is like Lenox Vs. Tyson, ya wouldnt be gettin shit in, in 12 rounds/
if ya 'drop' tha fact of dick rydin my style, then not just lyrically, but literally, ya could drop a pound/
'i aint see'n' you win this battle with your mistery ill lyrics, like you were written in 'invisible ink'/
now all need to think, this kid is like ESPN football Specials on Jocks, 'but this cat gets more dink'/
our illness rated in numerals, i was a perfect 100, while you were behind decimals/
you spittin out ill skills, as oftenly seen as Land Lords complaining bout not gettin pays from homeless people/

rar one 07-06-02 01:53 AM

vote= Dariel

Came with way harder punchs..
With multi syou two were pretty tied, but D started off way harder with his.. HIs metaphors werent that bad either..

one

F-Money Bags 07-06-02 02:05 AM

This battle was aight didn't see much punchlines from Az-Ace
but this bar really sounded gay:
Quote:
Shoot you hard… so you could go down like the titanic//


Maybe it's just me....as for Dariel, he came ill...with punches like these:

Quote:
he's cutin phone cords while he trys to call in his verse, so he can try and 'be off the hook'/

ya act like you 'Az-A-ACE', but you aint gonna whin shit when i am da 'Trumph'/

our illness rated in numerals, i was a perfect 100, while you were behind decimals/

you spittin out ill skills, as oftenly seen as Land Lords complaining bout not gettin pays from homeless people/


Word my vote goes to Dariel....1

heated fiery 07-06-02 04:57 AM

this wazn't a good battle in my opinion
dariel sharium took this battle easily
az ace had the better vocab but no
hard hittin punches or ill metaz 2 follow
the vocab ... ds had way better punchez
some dope wordplay he won in my eyez

my vote: Dariel Sharium

az-ace 07-06-02 05:00 AM

yo....... much respect for ur opinion.....
uppin^^^^^

Illrhymephonetic 07-06-02 05:58 AM

Un-Even
 
he's cutin phone cords while he trys to call in his verse, so he can try and 'be off the hook'/
i'm in the library, kicken the shit outta him, cause he needs intellegence, so i'm makin this kid 'hit the books'/


Tight verse right ther, good punch lines.

ya wouldnt be gettin shit in, in 12 rounds/
if ya 'drop' tha fact of dick rydin my style, then not just lyrically, but literally, ya could drop a pound/


This line also made me laugh my fuckin ass off.


Overall, gotta give it to dariel.

Dissapointed in ya ace after las weeks shit.

Peace

Dariel Shariem 07-06-02 09:58 AM

thanks... much love to all opinions...

i guess it wasnt to bad of a last minte keystyle....

4-0 me

Massive 07-06-02 07:52 PM

uppin for votes

Massive 07-07-02 01:09 AM

DARIEL SHARIUM WINS
 
OUTSIDE JUDGES VOTE FOR DARIEL 3-0



DARIEL SHARIUM- 2-0


AZ-ACE- 1-1

THX FOR SHOWING


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