Still_Remain vs teckniquess
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 30 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Topic-Laughter...

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-20-04 at 06:49 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

teckniquess has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-04 01:07 PM.

im waitin for you to check-in before i post my verse....

Still_Remain has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-04 07:13 PM.

My life, is usually filled with anger, hate and mostly cries,
And I can understand why, my thought bring tears to angelic eyes,
That’s why I love to just squeeze those moments, hold them tight
When I am so happy, instead of pissed of or in a family fight,
That’s right, I cry, I love the tears of joy I shed the most,
I don’t mean for any of this to come out funny or as a boast,
A toast, to laughter and the great feeling you get,
When you fret, you all love this feeling 100$ I’d bet,
When I hit this moment is when its great and I’m best to see,
Because for those few minutes or seconds, I hit emotional ecstasy…


i know its not big, but i was lazy, and the closer was just great so yeah.. i loved that closer.. that alone could own you.

tell me how you laugh in this aftermath
with a concept you cant grasp,repetitive pasts
tell me,whats the hilarity in that

we can discover new methods to chuckle
laugh till ya eyes tear & ur stomach buckles
use laughter to end strugle inhale laughin gas in puddles
laugh in huddles,but when we break its humble

humor can end hurt pain and hesitation
collaborations produce laughter in uncontained places
tamed faces, sustained feelings wit no hatred..

just a lil suttin suttin drop a link and ill return da favor

u didnt own no 1 in dis battle...ur verse had to do more wit ur problems at home...den about da topic which was laughter..lol its all good i aint tryin 2 start no beef

Voted For: Still_Remain

~Still_Remain~
I like Stills better...... his seemed to catch me better..... it had beter flow and some nice wordplay.... i do like his closer the .... Emotional Ecstacy.... thats awsome......

And i liked the way you started it off with how your life usually is instead of ....... like somehting that has to do with laughing....
Couple of your linez wee a little bit streched but you still got this one....

~teckniquess ~

You werent bad..... you had nice structure.... not a lot of your lines were sterched ike Stills.......
I liked your flow it was nice but i could go through stills faster and understand him a whole lot better......
You had alright wordplay .... but elevate.....
Your overall... i was pretty good actually... dont take me wrong... but Still_Remain..... he had me....


V/ Still_Remain

Return tha fava Down there!!!!~~~\/

Upping, this.. ness... yep........................

yeh...uppin my first topical battle...

Voted For: teckniquess

that was a nice battle nice battle
style-tech
on topic- tech
vocab.-hopes
and everything else is tied with yall two that was a good fight hope just stay ibe topic more bro

vote- teckniquess