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a pacifist
yo, too many people act evil and try to start beef/
Many cats cant breathe and others cant sleep/ They all feel threatened like they protectin heat/ and I'm bettin you walk softly so the stairs wont creep/ Like a wet suit in a suana ya'll sweatin the Pre/ But no worries I aint out for a kill/ My past been changed and my future yet to be revealed/ And present nature is gettin fulfilled/ Its real no matter what I strike as a deal/ It wont cross the rail-road track to backpack in my front yard/ Becuz they get sprayed in a drive by before they reach my boulevard/ yall prudent shootin and screamin out threats/ Why yall do that when after all you left in an ambulance reachin the vets/ Forget all that I said/ Cuz, unless I starve myself and where a toga they'll still want me dead/ (like ghandi) |
short post for me, felt liked doin an OPENMIC so peep it and be honest in ya feedback and please GIVE FEEDBACK!!!
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it was aight
nice wordplay, rhyme scheme in places was predictable... but on the whole it was a pretty decent drop 6.8/10 return the fave with feed on hip hop qoutables links in the sig keep the rhymes comin homeboy peace |
thnx dawg, still uppin yall!
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