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MC Prephickz 10-17-04 01:13 PM

a pacifist
 
yo, too many people act evil and try to start beef/
Many cats cant breathe and others cant sleep/
They all feel threatened like they protectin heat/
and I'm bettin you walk softly so the stairs wont creep/
Like a wet suit in a suana ya'll sweatin the Pre/
But no worries I aint out for a kill/
My past been changed and my future yet to be revealed/
And present nature is gettin fulfilled/
Its real no matter what I strike as a deal/
It wont cross the rail-road track to backpack in my front yard/
Becuz they get sprayed in a drive by before they reach my boulevard/
yall prudent shootin and screamin out threats/
Why yall do that when after all you left in an ambulance reachin the vets/
Forget all that I said/
Cuz, unless I starve myself and where a toga they'll still want me dead/

(like ghandi)

MC Prephickz 10-17-04 01:14 PM

short post for me, felt liked doin an OPENMIC so peep it and be honest in ya feedback and please GIVE FEEDBACK!!!

Dirty Nigga 10-17-04 01:25 PM

it was aight
nice wordplay, rhyme scheme in places was predictable...
but on the whole it was a pretty decent drop
6.8/10

return the fave with feed on hip hop qoutables
links in the sig

keep the rhymes comin homeboy
peace

MC Prephickz 10-17-04 02:13 PM

thnx dawg, still uppin yall!


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