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Technical 10-17-04 05:17 PM

Bitches And Money
 
bitches and money
chorus:bitches cant phase, wont graze as ur spouse, but b sure they will run up ur bank account, u cant choose between ur doe and bitch well at least ull b willen, cuz dere aint nuttin dat can fulfill men like women!

d-mizzle
Yo girl im on a budget, see dat escalade girl u cant touch it. wat tha fuck is wrong wit u, i aint givin u no more prota shoes or gucci boots, ima buy tha schechers that light up for u. we aint goin to expensive stores, itz Payless u only got 10 minutes jus get wat u cam for. jus remember u only got $20 to spend. last time i gav u $30 it will neva happen agen.
i got a new car today, no its not bentley or escalade. its a bike, we goin to mcdonalds to eat tonight, get an extra pair of pegs for my baby momma iight. we orderin from the dolla menu, bitch beta have money i dont mean to offend u. im livin in a 6 story mansion, im tha only one wearin all the latest fashions. i got u a box out on church av, u beta be happy a storms comin so that box wont last, i remember wen i got u tha baby phat but that was in tha past.
u hopin i will treat u beta, maybe.... neva.
chorus:bitches cant phase, wont graze as ur spouse, but b sure they will run up ur bank account, u cant choose between ur doe and bitch well at least ull b willen, cuz dere aint nuttin dat can fulfill men like women!

Notorious Verses
Word, We Gathered Wit Doe, None Fo Da Foes, Or Girls Dats Legit
My Style Is Like Welfare Dawg, Every Hoe Is On It
Chick Want Two Whips, Wit 20 Inch Rims And Chrome
But Don Want Da EZ Money By Givin Me Dome
She Want Da Luxury, Restaurants And Livin In Apartments
Not Knowin Behind Ha Back I Got Studio Compartments
Da Bills Aint Payed, Landlord's In A Rage
I Aint Go To Work In 4 Days, But My Bitch Want Me To Ask Fo A Raise
Bought Her Flip-Flop Phones And Gucci Slippers
Wastin Her Time And Precious Life By Bein A Stripper
She Want Me To Drug-Deal Like Im A Ex-Con
She Aint Doin Shit Fo Me, But Expectin Sean John
Phone Is Cut, Light Aint Workin, Water Is Cold
She Cut Up My Credit Cards And Spent My Money, Dam She Bold
I Walked Up To Her Streched Her Neck Like Spandex
Took Da Clip, Put Bullets In It, Yall Guess Wat I Did Next
Blood Was Ova Da Wall, Cops Came, Cuz Da Neighbors Called
I Snuck Thru Da Project Fronts, Thank God I Was Small
I Hustlin, I Was Slain, Killed Da Bitch Cuz I Was Unda Stress
Called My Chick On Da Side, She Tol Me She 5-0 And Im Under Arrest!

chorus:bitches cant phase, wont graze as ur spouse, but b sure they will run up ur bank account, u cant choose between ur doe and bitch well at least ull b willen, cuz dere aint nuttin dat can fulfill men like women!

Dmizzle
Yo my bitch love money, and i got it honey but u aint getting none from me.
Im a cheap ass nigga, $10 million dats alot of figures, but u aint gettin shit cause i put money ova bitches lik jigga.
i aint afraid to shoot bitch, for begging for money shit, i jus copped her a new whip. its called a metrocard beta use it before it expires bitch.
I aint buyin u no minks or leathers, u beta get an education start knowin ur numbas and letters, i aint LL Cool J, i wont love u beta.BITCH U after my chedder.
U beta be happy i hooked up ur apartment/box, tonight u beta be suckin on my cock. we aint gettin married so i wont buy u no diamond rock.
U gotta start sellin some bootleg shirts, or else i kick ur down on tha dirt u will feel hurt. i was blessed with the gift and the curse, anotha joint by Dmizzle and Notorious Verse.
(Get away from my money bitch!!!!! Ha Ha)

Notorious Verses
Ya Boys Is Back, Im Da Original Rap Nigga
Ill Kill A Bitch If I Find Out She A Gold Digga
She Gotta Noe By Now I Got A Fist Dat'll Shatter Her Spleen
If Dat Don Work I Got A Click Dat'll Shatter Her Dreams
No Complaints, Where We Live At Receives A Lot Of Rain
She Da Bank, Cuz All She Want Is Abe Links And Thomas J's
She Spendin All My Shit, Want Me To Go To Da Loan Claps
I Should Pawn Her Ass Get Back Her G-String And Her Braw Straps
I Aint Gon Leave Her Ass Cuz Dey Aint No1 Finer
Her Style Is Leavin My Wet Like Her Pantyliners
Understand Ma Its Only Cherries Im Poppin
I Aint Talkin Bout Doe, Wen I Say Its Hits I Deposit

Technical 10-17-04 05:18 PM

my bad, da first one i sent was off, now dis is da finished one, give feedback yall

RICH-Nytch 10-17-04 05:29 PM

dis is a genius

frein-ma$ter 10-17-04 05:49 PM

kkk this was just average,,,,,just....

6/10 cuz i did not like the topic.....too much commercial shit.....need to be more original and creative.....u could of used multies to make it more interesting and more wordplay to make it shine......just a lil toooo basic.....potential is there though.....keep elevatin...

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Golden shellz 10-17-04 06:50 PM

lol it was cool man, a 8/10
alrite wordplay keep it up yall

Kawn Flixx 10-17-04 07:34 PM

ummm give it a 7.1

it had nice wordplay

the structure was ok but change the font

I like the way it ended

but the topic needs a change

keep droppin


or I will hurt u...

peace


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