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NEW!!! SPuL Shit, nigkas!!!
i commented on R-Rated and Senserrr mu fuckas!! and Di's tracks. :)
Yea, it's called "My Story" yea, calam I kno you said redo it, but I ain't got time. so blah. real shit too. tru. *_* |
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Theres no link dude.
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LOL!!! damn, thanks for tellin' me that. lmfao
wow... lol www.soundclick.com/spulakareckless ^if you got hate, please don't jus say it sucks, tell me how I can improve. weerd. pc |
i never said redo it nugguh :p.. i just said,. if you wanted to, you could -_-
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yeah this was def. better quality...flow was fair...chorus I wasn't feeling just wasn't as emotional as it shoulda been an the way you delivered it was weak but definitely a vast improvement
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weerd, thx for feed. I'll improve on that shit. :) upp.....
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Emotions could be betta man, this was good quality betta than mine..lol flow was aight
u could have done betta chorus but u improved i c...............props fam............. |
.::This Was A Nice Track..The Quality Is Better Than Half The Peeps On Dis Board and Your Lyrics Were Nice. Flow Was Aight but The Chorus Needs Work. Nice Overall Drop Here Man. Keep Doing Ya Thang::. ~R~ |
Lmao, I Thought It Wasd The Beat Then I Go To Make Feedback N They All Talkin Bout Chorus...???...wtf...
. Ill Go Listen To The Right 1 Now...lmao,..... . AIGHT MAN I THOUGHT this was nice, good job...stay up..! :thumbup: |
1. Kill the yo yo shit an check it.
2. Turn your vocal's up. 3. Good Flow. on a Blah very generic beat. 4. Try not to make ur hook sound like ur verse's. sing a lil. It wasn't bad, All I can say is it does get a lil annoyin the way u Flow. The in an out stuff.....its jus a lil....a tad....annoyin. I'd like to see you stay "in" all the time. Nice. -1 |
aiight, thanks, man. I'll work on that. Gotta redo this later. word. I'ma check that "Searchin" song right now. weerd pc
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Yea..
All the yo and uh shit is done with.. Your hook is aight... Your presence is aight, ya flow is annoying to me for some reason.. but that's just me, you know.. This beat, defintely ain't feeling it... And ya emotion is aight.. Lyrics is straight, quality good... I say work on ya flow and emotion.. And ya voice also... that "aaa" "flaaa" "gaaa" shit needs to get lost.. Do you though, keep working at it. |
LOL>.SPuL... that was shit compared to your other ones...
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"Ya I got a big house, and lotta money - which is great/
but don't be runnin your mouth - cause my life ain't a piece of cake/" ^^OMG worst line I ever heard in my life. hahaha. ANYways... I thought you spent like a couple hundred on quality? It ain't as good as it should if you bought a good mic. Flow is better than last i heard of you. Not hot, but better than your last. I never knew you had a lisp... Not bad, just kinda slur words like you got fake teeth or something. ANyways, expected more from your "new quality". And you scraped a guy for a girl named Emily? Best line: Cause everywhere you go, it depends on your race/ cause no matter how much you know, you'll always be judged on your face/ ^^^ true 1 |
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