X-FELON vs SUPERVILLAIN
 

Battle Rules:

UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Verses Due Within 72 Hours
You Spit First

......bring it.......

:shoot: :shoot: :shoot:
s.v. dangerous..........big bad c.s.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-21-04 at 10:50 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

X-FELON has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 12:57 PM.

Supervillan man your killin me, It's not my fault you run around with a table cloth and your mamma's red panty's, Im steppin to the plate, So please don't hesitate, You wanna say your sorry but it's way too fuckin late, So you can sell those wolftickets to someone that want's to buy, but if you wanna come and get some then I wanna see you try, With a crew like Crhyme Sindicate, you could suck the chrome off a bumper cause I can tell you ain't no ordinary Bitch, Tryin to spit some shit, When you used to swallow, and tell your friends Ru Paul was your favorite role model, I came to this site to perfect my skills, while your ass is at home clickin your fuckin high heels, I think you watched 8 mile just one too many times, then found the site online and now you think that you can rhyme, Well let me get off your back just like the last man did, so you can grab your Dictionary and spit some complicated shit. X-Felon

SUPERVILLAIN has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 01:31 PM.

(IRONMIC PENITENTIARY, SINDICATE CITY...2:09 p.m...)

"a yo...pass the kite to x-felon..."

^^^player please...im tryna print this out on paper to read
fuck! i did that, it wont work...im not fluent in haterese
pal your foul...like a ball on 'that' side of the base-line
u couldnt even see me with your queer eye for the str8 guy
if lyrics were scratch and sniff, yours smell like ass and piss
if gay sex were accidents, u couldnt wait to crash in dicks
dont lie! this guy was arrested for pushin' crack dimes...
not the sacked kind, but the 1 in his pants on the backside
charismatical magic...this pimpness has total control of me
ur goin out wit my sister...and mister, SHE'S even all over me
when i spray in 15's dude, its only so my slugs can mingle
they kno u inside out, i blaze, u just burn like da usher single
im more lethal then death when i hit you with lead...
i'll put away this teck and just use my pencil instead
if hip hop were sinking and you were the only lifeboat around
ride wit u or go down? r.v. and i voted...we chose 2 drown
convicted twice 4 wack flows, theres no need 4 a 3rd strike
da wardens rite its hopeless, u shoulda learned the 1st time
im sick, determined 2 giv ur pc hiv and fleets of diseases kid
cuz ur shits all washed up, like lacey peta-sons baby fetus did

.....ouch. next time you'll have my pack of smokes and ramen noodles when i tell you to biotch!!!. now these large black gentleman will escort you back to your cell...compliments of the sindicate homie.

".....just in case you were wondering.....we're CRHYME SINDICATE convict. we'll never serve sentences, we just SERVE SENTENCES. plus, we got our own set of keys...we visit at anytime."

"...just ask nicely. lol."

the super......of the CRHYME SINDICATE

Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

Good battle, prolly one of the best I'd done seen in a while. MY vote goes to Super villian...Man he roasted u X sorry to say but I was LMAO the punches was on point structure, multi's, all that shit flowed in nicely, good job. X u gotta nice flow man but u have to work on ya stucture...

Vote - SV

^^^right on my man. thank you for the vote. much love my fellow battlecat.

also, much love to my opposer, x-felon. respect to you playboy. keep on keeping on brother. you got the potential to get down...make sure you use it to the best of your abilities. keep busy here on r.v.

oh yeah, i almost forgot.......welcome to SINDICATE CITY.

the super.........c.s.

Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

aight,
Villian, ya verse was straight...ya structure was on point n the overall flow was good...i saw that u didnt have any personals, but u had a good amount of multis...none of your punches really stood out, nah'mean, but there were still witty n u were consistent wit them...

X-felon, ya verse coulda used some work...there werent any personals or multis that i saw, n the punches were short of bein decent...overall i didnt see much creativity from u...n ya structure was horrible yo...u should hit 'enter' every time u finish a line instead of leavin it a big paragraph...keep elevatin tho...

V/ Supevillian, for more creativity n better structure...

This was feedback posted for SUPERVILLAIN
 

nice drop S.V...felon u need to work on the whole thing....that looked more like an audio peice to me
in text people like to see the rhymes other than that it was aight....but yea SV took this easily

Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

iight super got diz hands down, his verse wuz much more enjoyable too read, da puns n personals hit there mark an da flow n bars connected, decent easy to read structure, just a hot ass drop all round, keep em comin

X yo flow wuz whack, it didnt connect, an ya structure made the rhymes difficult too read, that is why iam voting for super, sorry X, no hate, just tellin it how i see it yo

thank you fellas. the honest feedback is much more than just appreciated...lets keep it going.

dont worry felon...its only your first battle bro...this is a learning experience, so dont get down on yourself. continue to ride cutty. you can do this. one.

s.v......a.k.a. father crhyme......big bad crhyme sindicate

Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

Makin sense of non-sense.....

Tryin to spit some shit, When you used to swallow, and tell your friends Ru Paul was your favorite role model
^^Best line. Shit for punches.no flow, no punches, No discernable structure. Not a personal, you just mentioned CS. THis felon shoulda stayed in prison.....3/10

^^^player please...im tryna print this out on paper to read
fuck! i did that, it wont work...im not fluent in haterese
^^^What a fucking opener. Just got better (somtimes a lil worse) after that. Punches made connections, a few misfires but they were bruied int he wordplay of this verse. Great flow and structure was mediocre but better than above. You can tell this is Supervillain. 8/10

One sided murder

One

Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

Supervillan man your killin me, It's not my fault you run around with a table cloth and your mamma's red panty's, Im steppin to the plate, So please don't hesitate, You wanna say your sorry but it's way too fuckin late, So you can sell those wolftickets to someone that want's to buy, but if you wanna come and get some then I wanna see you try, With a crew like Crhyme Sindicate, you could suck the chrome off a bumper cause I can tell you ain't no ordinary Bitch, Tryin to spit some shit, When you used to swallow, and tell your friends Ru Paul was your favorite role model, I came to this site to perfect my skills, while your ass is at home clickin your fuckin high heels, I think you watched 8 mile just one too many times, then found the site online and now you think that you can rhyme, Well let me get off your back just like the last man did, so you can grab your Dictionary and spit some complicated shit. X-Felon
^^^^^^^^^^^^ DA VERSE WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT STRUTURE NO FLOW~! I READ IT ANYWAY BUT U DIDNT HAD NO PUNCHES,NO PERSONALS,SOME WORDPLAYS,BUT DA PUNCHES DIDNT CONNECT ELEVATE USIN STRUTURE




^^^player please...im tryna print this out on paper to read
fuck! i did that, it wont work...im not fluent in haterese
pal your foul...like a ball on 'that' side of the base-line
u couldnt even see me with your queer eye for the str8 guy
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ WORD NICE PUNCH GOOD FLOW




if lyrics were scratch and sniff, yours smell like ass and piss
if gay sex were accidents, u couldnt wait to crash in dicks
dont lie! this guy was arrested for pushin' crack dimes...
not the sacked kind, but the 1 in his pants on the backside
charismatical magic...this pimpness has total control of me
ur goin out wit my sister...and mister, SHE'S even all over me
when i spray in 15's dude, its only so my slugs can mingle
they kno u inside out, i blaze, u just burn like da usher single
^^^^^^^^^^^ "OK" GOOD WORDPLAYS,GOOD PUNCHES DECENT ONES TOO GOOD FLOW



im more lethal then death when i hit you with lead...
i'll put away this teck and just use my pencil instead
if hip hop were sinking and you were the only lifeboat around
ride wit u or go down? r.v. and i voted...we chose 2 drown
convicted twice 4 wack flows, theres no need 4 a 3rd strike
da wardens rite its hopeless, u shoulda learned the 1st time
im sick, determined 2 giv ur pc hiv and fleets of diseases kid
cuz ur shits all washed up, like lacey peta-sons baby fetus did
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE~! GOOD PUNCHES GOOD CLOSA AND NICE FLOW'

SUPERVILLIAN-DIS WASNT AN MERKIN DIS WAS AN STOMPING TO REMEMBER,NICE PUNCHES DECENT ONES,GOOD FLOW AND WORDPLAYS,THA PUNCHES JUST THREW DOWN AND CONNECTED NICE PUNCHES

X-FELON-U DIDNT HAD AN GOOD VERSE NO STRUTURE NO FLOW NO PUNCHES (ALTHOUGH I DID READ IT) PUNCHES DIDNT CONNECT CAUSE OF DA FLOW,AND U NEED TO ELEVATE ON DA FLOW AND USE HARDER PUNCHES

~PEACE~