Premanition vs Gkillaz
 

Battle Rules:

6-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Crew Battle Here....Explained Votes, If Not They Will Be Removed...

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Check in by: 10-21-04 at 12:28 PM

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GKillaz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 03:51 PM.

Premanitions tryna fire shots wit no ammunition...
Kid suck, but it dont require alot to join definition...
My mission to destroy n kill - boy you aint got skill...
Dont gotta make LI's crew look bad, this choirboy will...
Your like a punching bag... the way your so punchable...
Kats justa cracka n a meathead eatin him like a lunchable...
Im like the principle of RV, N this students gettin suspended...
When my dawg Kingz KO'd ya thats when your career ended...
But your still here splendid!! I'll take this easy victory...
Breakin you off like a hickorystick, Ima win dont contradict me

iight man, crew battle.. good luck.. explained votes!!

Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 04:01 PM.

Gkillaz you got nothing but structure and played concepts…
you reppin 'g-side' but the 'definition' of that is non~vets....
regrets volunteerin for this cos his verse cud be crucial…
bad voting scheme?…
…only on ur shit cos I’d rather stick pins in my pupils…(1)
constant attempts to sway show ‘envee’ comin into play..(2)
like a personal planner u showin for this ‘made my day’…
grey ‘future’ my ‘name’ in black would kinda suit~ya…
just too complexed…apologies if my mind dilutes~ya…
acute angle cos ya punches neva connectin wiv ‘mandible’…
continueually try but can’t throw like ya hands~are~full…(3)


(1) - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155574
(2) – tryin to sway wen got ko’d by ‘envee’ (envy)…below… http://community.rapverse.com/showb...71&page=2&pp=15
(3) – mandible = chin bone

alrite uppin this!!!!

Voted For: GKillaz

This was a close one...
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Opener-
Closer-Prem.
Multies-GKillaz
Metas-GKillaz
Personals-Prem.
Punches-Gkillaz
Structure-Gkillaz
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This was obiously a very close battle...the only thing i can tell you both is to elevate-Prem. try to use some metas and multies it will up you game alot and i liked that Pupil punch a whole bunch!-GKillaz i saw those multies but they were very weak work on them...and good work with the Metas! and nice structure......that lunchable line was your best....V/GKillaz

lol.....o.k uppin this

elevate.....battles aren't all about fuckin multis its about punches and personals...

peace

UPPIN... lets keep the votes comin.... UPPIN...

Voted For: GKillaz

GKillaz:
nice stucture and vocabulary pretty dope punches to not bad probably better then me:o jk naw i would merk you if i tryed but no beef nice shit dawg liked that dope vocabulary dawg..keep it up and you'll be dope fuck!!!you took this battlw with not to much the toehr guy almost got you he had weak stucture..

Premanition:
k flowed nice stucture fucked try not to point out your punches cuz ovisly you had none just just said yes this and that you had no wordplay so dont try...lol stucture wasenthat bad but needed work punches weak vocab weak...nuff said dont you agree one sided almost...

VOTE: Gkillaz

hmmmmmmm.....

uppin

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Voted For: Premanition

persinalz and punches won this for prem fuck you riiped it.
gkillaz you need elevation on how to punch and to use personalz on people who are talented.
vote=prem

Voted For: Premanition

Aight this clash was close....But Premanition got this with his wordplay not feelin tht line
constant attempts to sway show ‘envee’ comin into play..(2)
like a personal planner u showin for this ‘made my day’…
But ya just got it
Flow/Tie
Structure/GKillaz
Wordplay/Premanition
Witt/GKillaz
Punches/Premanition
Personals/Tie

Voted For: Premanition

nice crew battle it was tough to judge but i think prem won:
he had the punches
he had the flow
he had the personals
you didn't have stucture cause i hate when cat gotta explain damn just leave it lone
you had vocab

g it wasn't bad and you get alot of same stuff that prem get but your punches were weaker and same with personal but you still will on the stucture.

so the vote goes to prem

UPPIN this battle.. we need some more votes, close battle here...

Voted For: Premanition

premanition killed it in dis battle....he had much better punches and creativity...he has a sick vocab..personals....and had some nice transitions between lines..the opener had me smilin already...big ups to prem....please please return da favor below..
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=155709