Mr.Freeze vs Lil-Youngstah
 

Battle Rules:

6-10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hating

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-18-04 at 07:15 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

Lil-Youngstah has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 04:18 PM.

Mr.Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 04:19 PM.

I rhyme like a Demon so u know i'll make ya "Stutter"/
i'll Cut-ya-in-half like if u was Soft-as-butter/
So like a "Recycled" verze i'll throw ya In-da-Gutter/
My punchez make ya "Dizzy" so u'll be da new "Drunken-Master"/
u like da Karate kid but more of a 'homosexual' Bastard/
lil-youngstah comin "Schooling" u how 2 Rhyme/
though your mom's payin me with her Ass, instead of pennies, nickels & dimes/
So everytime i'm on Stage i'll make ya "Choke" like B-Rabbit On-da-Mic/
I'll make u "Intense" just as i "Burn-da-Mic"....

Dat's my verze just waiting for your's now....aight

I didnt even know this battle was goin down but ill still prosper~
Ill massacre his homies, affiliations-basically every1 on his crews roster~
Il leave ya wit Scolds on ya wrists where my heat was dropped~
Smashin' this herbs ego wit my rhymes and lines...There was no need for the caps tht i popped~
Capture this cats pose in a block of ice-Fuckin wit me is a bigga gamble than a pack of dice~
Pickin out the precise-point to incise-Ya hangin on the edge of demise-
Coz ima merk this cat over once,twice,Naw....Thrice....

Bumpin' Uppin for this battle...peeps i didnt even know this battle was goin down..

Voted For: Mr.Freeze

punches-mr freeze(close though)
multies-lil
wordplay-mr.
creativity-mr (close)
metaz-none
personals-none

nice battle..it was close

ps. return favor and vote on my 4 battles

still uppin for votes........................................

Voted For: Mr.Freeze

iight this is gonna have ta go to Mr.Freeze

Mr.- You Just Came Harder.Your Structure Was A Lil Stretched Homie But The Flow Was Good And The Vocab. You came back with some nice wordplay and nice punches.
Just Fix Your Structure iight..

Lil- Your Verse wasnt bad it was actually good but even tho your structure beat his he just came harder all togeather. But you keep elevatin and try to make the structure all the same lenght dont make the lines different lengths.

Overall vote- MR.Freeze

Voted For: Mr.Freeze

Mr.freeze takes this shit no doubt got punchez vocab and the whole bag,,, man lil youngsta wrk on vocab and dnt mok b.rabbit man hell rock ur nought

Voted For: Mr.Freeze

Mr freeze
i didnt even know this battle was going down but ill still prosper/ ill massacre his homies, affiliations-basicall every1 on his crew roster.
thats wack. u need harder punch lines


lil youngster
the soft as butter part was so old just work on better punch lines also.
both emcees was wack put mr. freeze takes this win.

mr. freeze return the favor.

Voted For: Mr.Freeze

aight,
Okay battle....neither of yall had good structure tho...n i didnt see any punches that really stood out to me...Youngsta, u did aight...but u should git rid of the quotation marks, cuz u dont really need to make your wordplay that obvious unless it's really hidden...n the closer - u rhymed mic wit mic...u shot yourself in the foot wit that bar...Freeze, ya verse was straight too...but a couple lines were mad stretched, try n find ways ta' condense that shit...anyways,

V/ Mr. Freeze, for a better overall verse....no hate, jus givin some honest feedback...