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..kontroverzey.. vs Lyriclesolja
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15- 25 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting If you do not know how to vote on topicals betta ask somebody cause im tired of people sayin "you lost that topical bacause of punches" there are no punches in a topical battle We get two days after check in----------Topic Is----------Jail Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 10-18-04 at 11:11 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. DQ'ed for going over line limit |
Lyriclesolja has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 10:41 PM.
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jail...i alwayz do jail..alright here its ur decision
jail or you just found out your gurls pregnant |
..kontroverzey.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 10:43 PM.
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Both you found out your girls pregnats while your in jail-dat coo wit you?
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jea daz koo wit me....................................
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Wall Cat
. . . Yo as this sorrow fills my eyes, i hear the fellow prisoners silent cry's, to ashamed to hold it in, but i cant let it go then-its gonna fill me within, as the days turn into nights, the lonleyness bites-at my heels, i cant help but think of my former peers, about my wife and the baby inside, oh how i wish so deeply i could hear my baby cry, how i wish this would be all over so i could get out the pen, cause i feel i might die in this cell-i sit in, this is a trying time-this is hell-i sinned, wish somebody anybody would come with bail, so i wouldent be incarcerated and hated, hated by the one thing i may never have-my baby, i wanted to be there when it was born-such a great time, but im stuck in this square cause i got caught wit a nine, now he's lyin under a tombstone dead as a rock, wish i could turn back the hands of time and erase the chalk, but those days are gone and these ones dont pass fast, they say time fly's when your having fun and i understand that at last, i got to tell myself to take it day by day, cause 2marrows a new one and i pry to God it will be Ok, So now its 2 years down 23 more to go, 25 to life this hell is my home and the time passes so slow. . . -<that thing means take a breath |
..Sweet Sorrow As I remanise the beautiful pleasure Me And My gurl Explored Together.. ..been 2 years in these cold dark cells, last time she visited I can't even remember.. ..Repeatidly Obeying strict orders, Slavin away, scrubbin toilets for quarters.. ..No more fame or reporters, How can they have me livin like this? this is torture!.. ..Security guard approached with caution and said, "Theres someone here to visit.. ..As Im walkin down the hall one obvious question filled my mind, "Who is it.. ..Tears Of Joy but thoughts of wonder spread as i saw my girl.. ..Cries strolling as she said, Im pregnant Kontroverzey, it's a girl.. ..Mear Obsession turned to agression i felt like usher in confessions.. ..How Do You know it's mine I shouted with tention.. ..Times Up the security said, Put my hand on the glass and continued straight ahead.. How Do I TAke Care Of A child I cant even feed my neise.. Will i visit my daughter as soon as im released.. God please, give me the strength i bow on my knees.. Help me get through, hear my sad pleads.. ..Feeling quilty cause i'm not out there helping to support my woman.. ..Mixed with visions of my childhood, no daylight and suvere ass whoopins.. ..2 hard months pass, I just Won my case, i'll be free in a couple of days.. ..Experience of A life-time, im ready to be a man, forget all my evil ways.. ..Aggrevation and Frusteration, Im eagre to get out, Let a brotha' free.. ..First place i'd stop is , Buffallo, New York That's where my motha' be.. ..Finally Im out, beams of sunlight blinding, as i step out the gates.. ..Homies waitin, alcohol filled but i said, the celebration will have to wait.. .. Hopped In the lexus and strolled over to see how my baby do.. ..Open the front door to see The baby in the craddle, and anotha mans shoes.. ..Moans squeeks and happiness filled as i stepped towards her room.. ..an Angry roar raged out as i grabbed my gun as the door flew open "BOOOM".. ..Ready to pull the trigga then visions of jail flashed, i aint goin back.. ..took out the clip, tucked my piece, raised my fist and attacked.. ..Too my luck it was a Shaq lookin ma fucka only difference is he's all muscle.. ..Maybe the nine wasnt a bad idea, lookin at it, whatever it was i had to hustle.. .. My gurl said STOP! and told the man "settle down, whats fighting good for?".. ..In Disbelief i said "fuck this, grabbed the baby the crib and raced for the door.. ..Just before i opened it i heard a frusterated cry, The baby is not Yours.. ..It hit deep in my chest i turned around seeing them both laughin.. ..Im Done With This, I loaded the Gun and without hesitation i began blastin.. ..Her Man dropped with ease, my "ex-girl" backin up screamin Kontroverzey please!.. ..Tears streaming down i said sorry, closed my eyes and I let the gat blast again.. ..One To The Dome, I pointed the gun to my head As i knew my life was down the drain.. *BOOOOM* |
Uppin will return honest votes.......50 muthafucnkin charicters
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Voted For: ..kontroverzey..
kontraversey gets this but was quite a nice battle.... kont took this for a few reasons, his structure was beta but blah i don't look into that too much, his had a much beta meaning to it and i cud see wot he was sayin in my head....vocab and wordplay was beta....really nice drop dawg liked alot... lyrikal ur shit was o.k but not much behind it i didnt think but keep elevatin n droppin... peace will y'all hit up my battle wiv gkillaz at the top of front lines wiv an honest vote...crew battle... thanx |
uppin this.......ill return the favour...............
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Uppin dis hot shit.......will return honest votes..
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