Tha Unknown (Uk) vs Streetryda
 

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Check in by: 10-21-04 at 12:03 AM

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streetryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 12:04 AM.

Tha Unknown (Uk) has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 12:05 AM.

U don't wanna battle nigga
I'll take it ol' skool
make a circle wit my niggas
an start baggin me a dude
on tha real streetryde
I'll step ta yo ass quick
ain't no glitch off in my clip
I'll bust u in yo lip
most niggas,
they count they bullets
as they cock an bang ya
but I,
carry an auto-matic
an keep one in tha chamber
an I,
will let cho have it
if yo ass is a stranger
on tha streetryda man
yo ass is in danger
in tha,
eyez of a dead man
an tha mind of a menace
I will,
put mo rounds in ya
than they can add ta tha book of "Guiness"
an I,
will chop u down
like yo ass a tub of spinach
roll u up like a blunt
an smoke yo ass when I'm finish


nuff said.....................................

unknown shown that he aint got no structure in his verse
blown out of proportion distorted his world, now its cursed
lets see if this emcee can even post enought to boast about
you got no paddle to get you anywhere so you coasted out
noticed now that tha unknown's zone isnt all that hyped up
this fag only fucks with men he aint ever gona be wifed up
knifed up to cheap to afford any type of heat to reap with(as in kill)
tower over your style all the while you still cant leap it
structures wak flows crap, just a few of ur weakness(es)
only votes your gettin is when you got your boys peepin this

uppin on this mayne............lets gets some votes comin peace~1

Voted For: streetryda

im gonna have to go honest here...

Streetryda:
k you had dope flow...nicely lined up stucture nicly attepted punches... not bad but just to let you know swearing aint punches lol there just sayin your gay or something lol...just stating that out..kinda weak vocabulary tho...coulda been better...try workin on complex words n rhymes...but nun the less you won...

The Unknown (uk):
im not haten on you dawg...but you have no punches worth anything andyou ahve so short of lines your stucture is fucked...your lines are so short hell you cant have good punches or wordplay and stop saying nigga every damn line even if you are black shut up your wack as fuck rappper but not bad for a newb tho...but need lots of work dawg...

VOTE: streetryda

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