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PostmorteM: In The Attic...
Dark beat, catchy hook good story if you can catch it for the most part...read the lyrics along if you want...
Verse 1 - Me Verse 2 - Dank Verse 3 - Rapidfire Hook - Rapidfire In The Attic... |
I will edit links soon...don't close this..and if you reply to mine..I'll check yours...
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Verse 1 - SmokaJoka
Flow is ok...lyrics are pretty nice, you sound out of breath for you whole verse tho....presence is ok Verse 2 - Dank Dank sounds the same as always..gets kinda boring after a while, but I know he won't change his delivery...lyrics are decent..dark...maybe could doo some more conplex rhyming Verse 3 - Rapidfire Ok...pretty average...flow seems iffy at times. lyrics are average, nothing great....delievry is pretty good Hook - Rapidfire Hook is meh..not really feelin it Overall a decent track you 3...some parts could be improved...like lyrics and such...keep at it |
Coo...reply to this shit bitches....fuck
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I Wasn't Feeling The Beat....Kinda Sounded Like ICP A Little Bit... Hmm....The Delivery and Shit Needs To Be Improved... I Mean I Can't Hate Because Thats The Style Ya'll Like So Thats Straight....It Flowed and Sounded Decent...So Props To Your Production. Just Keep Recording and Elevating. ~R~ |
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