yo help please
 

I wanna get better at multies and need someone to teach me how to do them correctly so read to see if im doing them correctly thanks.... Can someone also show me how ya work on the 2nd lineof your bar better so you get a good flow going on.


so you could have this


This rappers a fake easy to get rid of and break
he's a hoe cake and an emcee everyone hates! this is the one I don't understand very well....

or could u do this

whenever ya talk ya always walk ur a joke
ur a bitch who lives in a ditch smokin coke

wack example I know but just explain what I should be doing and highlight ur own examples so that I can follow thanks

Both have multis in it, the more the better, but don't have them make your verse sound fucked up, namean? and of course have better lines.

-CJ-

whenever ya WALKIN ya always TALKIN-ur a joke,
ur a BROKE bitch who lives in a ditch smokin coke.<<<<there thats better
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This rappers a fake easy to get rid of and break-he's easy to beat
he's a hoe cake (faggot) and an emcee everyone hates!
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as for the second half of you bar rhyme it with any word in the sentence but make sure it makes sence!
Example:
"yo you a hoe that nobody knows,
you lose all your battles wit those wack flows."
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if you still need help PM me on aim Btracy247
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or go to the tutorials at the bottom of the main page....Peayce

^none of those are multis.

W/E....Learn him OMB

orite thanks that makes it more clear. I've got msn if you wanted to speak to me on that d12kings8@hotmail.com

Im doin this on the phone.. so shh if it doesnt help..

Gimme a break...... these dudes are fake
watch the steps I take.. or youll make a mistake

thats a RHYME SCHEME not a MULTI


blah blah blah blah wreckem n rawtem
blah blah blah blah tekks when I draw em

^THATS a multi... multiple syllable rhyme.


just screw round with rhyme schemes... thats what those examples are doin... u can put multis into diff schemes too if u want

jea....imma master everything..check the multi

Mayn, Gimme a break this dudes a fake Like pencils he's easy to break...
Big Mistake Money can Wait cause this time, it's your life Imma take...

^Their not 100% multies.. More like internals..

Multies are sequences of rhyming words that are repeated more then once in a bar, not just the same rhyme repeated a lot.
Sinner, you were on my msn last night, I told you to read OMB's multi tutorial, did you do it or not?

its good 2 have multi's but better with flow.... u can tell when it falls apart if it doesnt flow. multi's r just extra 4 flavor:)

jea i know nos i forgot to put


There's some multi's mixed with some punches...holla

I work on my assonance mainly. Multies are good sometimes, but if every line is full of assonance it just makes your flow insane..

Check out one of the bars in my latest topical.. It wasnt enough, but itll show you what I mean..

The morning was silent, in the aftermath of a violent night..
Many had died, and those who survived confided in suicide..

jea thats a dope line...because

1) it had a good consistant flow
2) good vocab
3) multi's were there
4) it was create



thats the characteristics of a good line^

that's why we trying to help him....