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Breathe Easy
*Ya ni99az got me Really confused out Here Like i aint the greatest writer of the 21st century Feel Me Ni99az~~~~~~~~~Breathe Easy* I was Delivered from a Black 22 Year Old Vaginal Capacity Whodini Tendencies at Age three u could call me Majesty Forever has this Consistence protrayed a day in the Life Focused upon with Suspicion like ah Arabic in a Flight Quadroople Scriptures Surface from every Single Approach Death 2 Breathe Strokes like 300 Pounders stayin Afloat U can Purely Understimate any Tendencie produced from Me Cuz me and Defeat is Like tryin 2 Convince the Dead to Breathe Never Tolerate any Uneccessary Feedback dont kno where BladeBe Frequent Stops to Bronx and Bx city Usually no Trouble finding a Yankme *So thats 10 hot barz and yet im still Understimated U kno wha ima make u fucks Breathe Easy ...Believe Me* Respect is Demanded when eva the Name is Mentioned without Pention Totally Unfocused and Devoted 2 the Purpose like 5 Yr olds in Detention Delivered upon to the Wrong side of the Tracks,so tell whats to Miss? Unbelivable Accomplishments like Slap Boxing with out Any Wrists All hail to the Truest believe me its in my Pedigree purely Undisputed Steadily Frowned upon like Pre Marital Sexual Relations from a Judist...Priest ~~~Breathe Eazy~ |
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that was pretty good. good vocab and nice flow to it.....probly the best 8 barz i seen in an open mic. keep it up..........
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This was nice.....i was feelin the rhythm on this....wit a solid relax beat...shit..lol am thinkin audiowise but this was good drop fam work on less sylables cuz some ar stretched than others
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That Was Gator 4sho *troop*. I Actually Heard It And Saw It My Head While I Was Reading.good Mental Picture Painting.this Is From The Dude U Called A Fukin Clown.but I'm Also A Fair Clown So I Give Props To Those Who Deserve It And You Got That.get@me Whenever U Ready.
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iight good vocab that really stood out but the mood of the rack was conflicting from begging to end lemme elaborate..
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^^ that bar had me feeliong like i was going into a Black Album type song ya know talkin bout how you grew up and shit. Quote:
^^that bar switched the mood WAY too quickly from an introspective song to a hardcore song, that wasn't too cool :( but overall for what you were aiming at you did a pretty good job, but yea flow can definatly be fixed up, and how deep you go into it needs to change a little also. :thumbup: |
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Damn. for real man i saw it all. Ya gorwin up, all the vocab was excpetional. Structure made it easy. Interlude was nice. Fo real stay up.
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nice drop dawg. The first to bars wouldve killed anyone.
"I was Delivered from a Black 22 Year Old Vaginal Capacity Whodini Tendencies at Age three u could call me Majesty" that was hot dawg. Keep bars like dat comin. U killin cats wif 8 bars dawg, lol, holla NICE DROP |
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Respect is Demanded when eva the Name is Mentioned without Pention
Totally Unfocused and Devoted 2 the Purpose like 5 Yr olds in Detention- hahaha holla Nice little drop--- Uppin this shit for famoz |
4 sho thanx 4 the luv fam
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it wuz nice troop, da bars connected really well n da flow wuz sickening, nice drop, real enjoyable to read, only flaw is there shuld have been more
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