Strikez vs J.R. Freeze
 

Battle Rules:

10 12 lines
blind spit
u set up
no d/r
or crew votes
due 30 mins

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-19-04 at 07:32 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Strikez has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 07:08 PM.

J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 07:12 PM.

I'm new to this site, so this cat don't know my name
But still my rhymes are ill, and I'ma put him to shame
Your punches for sure wouldn't hurt your grandma
We never met, jerk, but already I can't stand ya
I'll devour your skills like I eat ice cream cone
Leavin you haunted bitch, with out nice dreams yo
Battles begun time to lyrically kill, so you know It's time bitch
If friends could help your skills, you would be rhymeless
Go and buy a bra for your boobies you dumb noobie
Sorry to tell ya, but your girl is one of my groupies
Battling me was like you affording your rent
No where to go, and all of your money spent

Ya mic shakes like fake thugs faced with courts of criminal law/
You only “tight” like underwear, the way u always Grippin on balls/
ya claims of illness is fallacy, honestly ya quality is in question/
if you purchased your skills, you fuckin made a losing investment/
Dismantled with verbs and barz of murder I know it hurts/
StRikez you couldn’t defeat me in a rematch if I posted the same verse/
Like TV Guide you always come weekly(weakly), how you expect to win/
Cause ya rhyme like an anorexic joggin… ya skills are “runnin thin”/
fuck no-shows you're still-gonna-perish/
cause like "dead beat dads" you're skill-isn't-a-parent"(apparent)/
Like a pushup wonder bra, watch the votes that I “rack-up”/
Got ya down, an like broken cop radios, theres no way you’ll get “backup”/......

Wow..... I should just give up, your shit was seriously good.... I'm obviously a 'tad' newer than you are =P

Dude where you learn how to spit sweet shit like that, gotta tell me =)

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Voted For: J.R. Freeze

lol dawg you pretty tyte only thing u need to work on is ur flow..but u fo sho a vet in the makin..lol ur punches is pure dopeness...i think u'd be dope at audio....im feelin this fo sho j r took this no doubt...betta punches betta strcture betta errythang

rtf

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155489

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Voted For: J.R. Freeze

Theres a murder goin on herre....

Battles begun time to lyrically kill, so you know It's time bitch
If friends could help your skills, you would be rhymeless
^^only line i like remotely. So wahck. Don't know where to strat. Boobies? BOOBIES? Are you fuckign retarded. COne and yo? We must be on crack. no flow at all no punches no shit.
1.5/10

Finally some good shit....
Ya mic shakes like fake thugs faced with courts of criminal law/
You only “tight” like underwear, the way u always Grippin on balls/
^^You coulda left it there. You own with the opener. This bitch had no idea what was comin. YOu had punches that hit, flow, metas, and multi-syllable rhymes. It's all over
8/10

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