ThirdDegree vs D Fury
 

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

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D Fury has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 09:26 PM.

ThirdDegree has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-04 06:43 AM.

Does the D in D Fury stand for done for?
Ya Finished, don't even try to spit anymore

I gave ya three days, times low on the clock
You'll be done at deadline, I'll call you hick dick and dock
Ya only Fury is in gay porn when you get hurried
You and Lloyd Banks in that video, cept his face was blurry

I'm hott coming back here, Burnin with re-entry heat
Cut me at the ankles, you still couldn't deal D-feet
Because I'm sure every one knows that I got D beat

You couldn't make waves if you was sinkin cruise boats
Call you Varitek after you catch my blade in your throat

Your punches don't connect liek operators fallin asleep
Ya musta lost ya marbles cause I'm playin for keeps

Get prescriptions for Zertec cause i got D-pressed
I'm not a newbie, as you've probobly guessed
Like battlin calenders, boy ya days is numbered
Spittin lyrical thunder, put you in lyrical slumber

You won't win this battle, its beyond your control
You'll have to get bitten more than Snow Patrols




If you don't get a line ask for clarifactaion

He ain't gonna show, he's got till lake 6:30 tomorrow mornin

U a bitch brah I saw you grippin the sleeves of a Villain...
Waitin for my final answer like you was Regis Philbin...
Easy killin,some take it outside I take it to the hearse...
My muscles had explosions of faith like a grenade in a church...
I'm waiting to burst like pregnant chicks in hospitals...
If you see victory you better fix ya opticals...
Your spits Offensive! And i whore authority,fuck ur seniority...
Your the warrior head of gay poetry sorry homme aint with that sorority...
Often I spit to diss-grace a kids plans...
Ur not true,ur soft and faker than sailine implants...
U got the dispatch on speed dial,calling all the time...
Like a quarterless bitch at a coin-op alwayz droppin dimes...
Theres no debate,I'll take wins without bowin down...
Even when using ya big boy voice u still sound like bow wow...
So let me try to make things more clearer...
The only way I lose is if I battle myself in the mirror...


Goodluck kid.........peace....

Voted For: D Fury

this was a good battle for sure. i read 3rd first and really liked his structure and thought he will get my vote but then i read fury and it just hit harder period, he killed it in the last line for sure, he hit with pretty much every line and 3rd some of your lines werent hittin hard at all
"Does the D in D Fury stand for done for?
Ya Finished, don't even try to spit anymore"
and thats the first line, not to good to start out with.
so ima give it to fury

Voted For: ThirdDegree

BRILLIANT OPENER AND GOOD VOCAB PUNCHES HIT QUITE HARD AND STRUCTURE WAS GOOD U GOT MY VOTE MAN I LIKED IT MAN THAT WAS A DOPE VERSE
D FURY STRUCTURE WAS QUITE TERRIBLE AND PUNCHES NEVA LANDED SORRY DAWG

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Voted For: D Fury

this was pretty one sided but ima have to hand this one to my boi d-fury

Third
you had a pretty decent verse... it was pretty long ... some punchlines were decent some were just falling off... structure was decent.... personals were ugh cuz i really wasnt feelin any of them really ..overall nice verse but d-futy took this

d-fury
pretty dope verse...dawg..you had some nice punchlines... overall your structure was decent alittle better then third...your punchlines were hitting alot harder then thirds..personals were iight both were at a tie..but overall in structure..punchlines and creativity....d-fury took this

pz.

This was feedback posted for ThirdDegree
 

you suck man damn just like archangle hahahahhaha

Ayo D didn't have a singular personal. That rhyme is so generic they could sell it at walmart

Uppin for votes

Stop fuckin bitchin ^^manye seriously...personals dont matter much too me...I dont use em that much gotta problem wit that anyways UUUPPPPIINNN........

Voted For: D Fury

i vote d flury

flury punches was more effective more easy to grasp flow well, verse was completly creative, signs of multis was there authority/seniority bar, diss was more funner besides hes verse was all around a good soild drop.....

thirdDegree
ya flow was the main thing u had going for u'r-self in this verse cause u lacked effective punches which mainly win battles, u'r creativeness was average u could elevate that a little, diss was decent another thing u had going was that but diss/flow dont automaticly win u the battles creativeness/metaphores/punches MAINLY do but nice try....