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Terse. 10-19-04 09:31 PM

Kwell vs D Fury
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew/Hate/BS/DR Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-19-04 at 10:31 PM

Must drop verse in 150 minutes after check in.

System 10-19-04 09:32 PM

Kwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 09:32 PM.

System 10-19-04 09:36 PM

D Fury has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 09:36 PM.

Terse. 10-19-04 09:53 PM

U hardly dangerous.....so why the fuck u tryna spark me?
keep bein a lil dickhead, n i'ma hafta dismember u from RV
utterly stupid n straight up untalented: that's D defined
wanna know what's in ya head? then read in between the lines
thaz *blankness* if u didnt catch that....shit, i know u slow
but i aint gon go easy...i'll leave u duckin me like u owe me dough
u only questionably murderous, like O.J. wit that white bitch
but i doubt ya lethal...u couldnt kilowatt if u flipped a light switch
i might as well give u an advantage, u should git a gun n clap me
but u sittin on Cloud 9...which is prolly why u got sunned so badly

.Wicked One. 10-19-04 10:19 PM

I bring impermanence to eternalists with a murder wish...
Plough the fuck through your verse like a wheel chair hurdalist...
Homo,you spark wack rhymes,I stay impervious...
You need to send your reply to Furys ghost writing services...
Tackle me? Ur fuckin stupid,better yet your fuckin autistic...
I’ll beat you into my unbeaten in battle statistic...
Your like the Hoover Dam tryin spark heat from forced flows...
You be the next detective cripple like Columbo when I land blows...
Are you a fuckin Joke?Dont talk to me or speak my lyrics in disses...
You’d die a loser if to battle and beat me were your last wishes...


Goodluck manye.........peace..........

K.ontroverz.Y 10-19-04 10:22 PM

Voted For: D Fury

d flury took this because of coav...structure....and wordplay......d and kwell your shit was both nice but i give this to D fury because of these various reasons...d you had a much better multi's and vocab.....wordplay was theer...you just took that by the skin of your hair nigga..but dope shit

vote:D

Terse. 10-20-04 08:39 AM

aight, uppin #1....we need some votes...drop links...

Terse. 10-20-04 05:55 PM

uppin #2.....vote plz...i'll return the favor.....

Spite 10-20-04 06:29 PM

Voted For: Kwell

aight
kwell
You started off alrite, nothing hard hitting, flow was there, the o.j. line is played but yours was kinda different. cloud 9 was meh, nothing great but alrite battle verse.

d-fury
vocab was not bad, first 2 bars was nice, your punches were so hard hitting either, although i was diggin the flow.

close battle.
vote - kwell (little better punches, even on the flow)

Terse. 10-20-04 11:17 PM

uppin #3....drop an honest vote here, n i'ma do the same fo u, jus drop some links...

Terse. 10-21-04 08:29 AM

uppin #4.............................drop links n i'ma return the favor.............

Terse. 10-21-04 07:13 PM

uppin this...we need some more votes.....i'll return the favor...

ThirdDegree 10-21-04 08:59 PM

Voted For: D Fury

Back with a brand to vote...

thaz *blankness* if u didnt catch that....shit, i know u slow
but i aint gon go easy...i'll leave u duckin me like u owe me dough
^^Best punch. Great structure some good personals i like the killowatt liine. OJ line was aiight. Solid verse 7/10

Your like the Hoover Dam tryin spark heat from forced flows...
You be the next detective cripple like Columbo when I land blows...^^^Killer wordplay. Love the hit. Hurdalist line was funny as fuck, great vocab, good structure. Lackin persoanls tho..8/10

GREAT BATTLE

one

M-Eazy 10-21-04 09:16 PM

Voted For: D Fury

fury killed you on this one dawg...partially because yo structure was fucked up, and i couldnt understand half the stuff you was saying because of that...work on that...you had nice shit in there, but i dunno bout it

fury dropped hotter multies and punches in this one, and ducked out with my vote...his structure was better also...

thats all i gotta say
return votes on my battles

ghetto cripple 10-21-04 09:54 PM

Voted For: D Fury

ok i feel that d won this one cause of some good ass lyrics and hard ass hits, d has good talent as shown in this battle rhyming wish with hurdalist and others,he used his knowledged of wat he knows also, impressive,his lines were written clean also, i like the way they were written personally i like the wheel chair line and the cripple columbo line.

kwell simple rhymes, me and rv, bitch and switch, lines were alil choppy though i really liked the light switch line and the last one was aight.

my vote goes to d and i dont want non ya'll thinkin im votin for him cause im cripple and he has some cripple lines in his verse,
im not bein biased infact i was not going to vote because of that fact but the better of the two shouldnt get screwed.this is how i judge:

clean lines:d
hard hits:d
rhymes different words:d
creativity:d
entertaining:d


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