fuckin bars of fire
 

like g-unit im pop them thang/
im the reason why in da hood it gose bang bang/
in this batlle youll need a teflon rapped around your chest/
my puchline leave u a fucking bloody mess/
mac ten's mac 11's time for some clappnn/
win this batlle so fast you ant even no what hapnn/
loc to the dog my name stands for trouble/
nigga you betta loc and load on the double/
back down befor u wind up on the back of a milk carton/
put 12 shelll in you as if u were a egg carton/
fuk around and i have u hooked up to an i.v./
that is what u get for tryin to try me/
to go against me it takes guts/
you need a heart of a lion and king kongs nuts/
my favorite buddy is gun/
bet he'll have u lookin like spaggetti when hes done/
youd betta not step on my air ones /
if u do its redrum ready here it comes/
run that mouth till i bust the chrome/
youll be crying like a bitch when the hollow tips crush ur bone/

this should be in open mic and it needs work to...

yeah take this to open mic man.
I didnt even read it because it is in the wrong place.
but if you copy and paste it into open mic i will post some feed 4 you.
pz

:huh: i think your fire got damp :nono:

*Agrees with posts above*

*Closes thread*