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Terumoto 10-20-04 04:28 AM

One-Man-Band vs DV8
 
Battle Rules:

20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


VOTES ARE TO BE BASED ON MULTIS. THIS IS A MULTI BATTLE FOR TITLE OF MULTI MASTER. BASE VOTES MAINLY ON MULTIS.

ANY VOTES WITH EMPHASIS ON PUNCHES, WORDPLAY, ETC. CAN BE REMOVED.

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 10-20-04 at 07:28 AM

Must drop verse in 2380 minutes after check in.

DV8 / Daz gave up the win

System 10-20-04 04:48 AM

One-Man-Band has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-04 04:48 AM.

System 10-20-04 04:48 AM

DV8 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-04 04:48 AM.

DV8 10-20-04 10:49 PM

its breathe i fuse watch how the rest i move..against me..? then its death you choose
my style stays smooth,..id battle my reflection if I wanted ta watch the winner lose,
…..OMB ain’t toppin me…… you’re a waste of time ‘C’ cuz your multi’s fail to mime…. ‘D’,
From the ‘d' 2 the ‘z’ the last 1 to take me out was the doc who delivered me..!
this bands broke like Im cuttin strings i bring so much flow that I leave this man soaked,
take a toke it’s a known quote 1 chokes around me like im dispersin second hand smoke,
mask this band its merely the task at hand your really think you can win, your spastic man,
Cut circulation like a cluttered fan n snap this 1 quicker then bungee’s with a rubberband,
Tie ya tongue to defaet, how you hard..? eat ya soundcard if wanna hold ya lungs to a beat,
Kid ya fuckin with heat n playin hopscotch on the block is da only time you son’n in the street,
immenite death is next so im blazing text n preaching strongly on how wrong ya multi's be,
easlly leave you screamin calmly…! im slept on cuz if you won..your dreaming probly,
i stay terminally jagged n have ya balls verbally castrated cuz in rap..you’ll neva make it,
Ya over-rated.. soul traded 4 skill..? you got nill.. or the watered down sripts that be faded,
My mains surgin while I keep lames burnin, one couldn’t hold my heat like flames burstin,
Ya shit aint encouragin …! Quit wit da cursin,..Seems ya verse n wack jus started mergin,
fold'n fakes like creases, you Takin shots threw telekinesis cuz I stay breakin cocks to pieces,
ill Stay fuckin ya nieces while im Mockin ya blocks cuz you spit softer then the fillin in Reese's,
kick'n lyricistic supremacy n im ticking wit ballistic tendencies to fuckup those who threat'n me,
ya rippin faulty multi’s, so im obviously getting the victory with 99% the voting majority,
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That’s all folks.pc….

Terumoto 10-21-04 03:31 AM


Have u ralfin ya poop.. ya body in the trunk, head in the shelf a my coupe
peel his scalp n' then scoop, eatin Deevys's brain like some alphabet soup
Strapped in a chair, belted n' fastened……. lock up the cellar then gas it n’ chuckle
Pumpin plenty of acid to muscle, keep applying till ya skeleton shatters n’ buckles
wit damagin haste.. aint got an average taste, that Hannibal savage replaced
Eatin ya up easy…..….when i'm through, Kanye's wire couldn't salvage ya face
My style’ll test him…….. punches spray at 100 miles per second, many cringing blows
Just to step this kids a joke… how he gonna win? I taught him everything he knows
The cats I beat? Them dudes are floorin you, seriously, Deevys life is balled n’ through
Multi battle? Please…………………….. you learnt how to do multis by reading my tutorial
My multis amaze….. battling them’s like trekkin a labyrinth with hundreds of obstacles
Check battles, hunt em n follow em. its all my opponents that are the ones in hospitals
i'm sleek and sexy while ya whole physique is messy…... ain't no need to compare
drown you in an ocean of rhymes while ya hopin to die. ya whole fleet's in despair
ya bleed, I won't care. Why battle me multis? i'm already crowned and its finished.
this verse is just a warnin, though. next time, i'll have you drowned n' diminished.
i frown when ya bring it………………………………… why? cuz you're still a rookie.
if brains were "chocolate", you wouldn't have enough "chips" to fill a cookie.
Ya don’t know rappin, kid, ya rely on assonance, and ya wordin’ is faulty..
Next time… before ya have this type-a battle.....try LEARNING THE MULTI!!





REMEMBER: A multi is a multiple syllable rhyme... a lot of people confuse multis with assonance (repeating a rhyme).

VOTE ON MULTIS, NOT PUNCHES/WORDPLAY etc.

Mad Dog 10-21-04 04:17 AM

Voted For: One-Man-Band

This was a good battle but OMB got this multi battle actually quite easy...i mean when ya put everything aside...OMB was more on point wit the multies DV8 i think ya struggled because of the layout of ur verse i think at points u didn't actually multi at all and jus rhymed and at other points u had internal rhymes and some decent assonance...but jus finished wit an end rhyme...example

still a rookie
fill a cookie < OMB and a multi

in the street
multi's be < DV8 jus an end rhyme

V/One-Man-Band RTF on ma sig :thumbup:

But hott battle everything else on both sides but jus votin on the multies front but both very enjoyable read

¤ÐÅž¤ 10-21-04 03:53 PM

This was feedback posted for DV8
 
yep, punchin to much.
..not usin multi's enough=shitty battle
blah..gimme the loss n move on...
lol...am i bit sore bout this battle?.....yes/yes i am...lol

Abraxas 10-21-04 06:29 PM

This was feedback posted for DV8
 
damn you wrote a essay.. and shit there wasnt any Direct punches....
or at least tell me prolly i missed one.. but damn... good drop though...

Abraxas 10-21-04 06:30 PM

my bad............................................... .......

Parallel 10-22-04 07:15 PM

This was feedback posted for DV8
 
nice but it was over played to streched dawg...but some multis that gave off flow but no steched honest just checkin to...

Abraxas 10-22-04 08:52 PM

your IP's dont match dv8 and daz...........................

Terumoto 10-22-04 08:55 PM

maybe diff comp or sumthin.........

Logic The Goonie 10-23-04 03:32 PM

This was feedback posted for One-Man-Band
 
ahhhhh this is the fuckin streched bar homeland, i cannot vote on this shit

¤ÐÅž¤ 10-23-04 11:59 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Socrates
ahhhhh this is the fuckin streched bar homeland, i cannot vote on this shit

narrow minded simplitic bs...!
you've become a dickhead over time big "c"....
played n stretched??...only apply when theres no flow to be found...!
so soc n exclusive go to hell n take ya trash spits with ya...! :thumbup:

intensify effect 10-24-04 11:45 AM

Voted For: One-Man-Band

danm son nice drop 4-real, dv8 nice drop 4-real this is a close battle im just check'in the polls seening my crew doing holla,

but this is a hella battle word probley battle of the month.....


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