who's wrong? ~street science~
 

Introductions~

Yo in life we all make our own decisions
on how we choose to live,but some times
things go wrong because of it,,
But when it becomes hard just trying to survive
The streets is all we got for a living,,,
But we cant make it if we're still being prosecuted
After our prison time has been searved,,,
So who really needs to change,,if your asking for us to change?
Follow me on this one..


~Verse~

Yo im looking in the mirror checking out my reflection.
The killer that i've become is far from prefection.
The streets done got me changed an now im looking for directions.
God forgive me for my deceptions
The devil is using my weakness for his hotel an now he's checking in,
To keep me from making corrections daum its stressing.
Now im skipping breakfast the temptation has got me worried up.
I never killed forreal ,but i still feel that im a murderer.

On the the block serving a young mother with 3 kids,
An no place to live an just been evicted its hard to live with this.
Only God is my witness im holding a tight fist with nothing to grip.
Dropping my chips over a fence where a body lays limp
In his days you know he played pimp.

What goes up must come down just like shawn kemp.
Life goes on,but you got to know when to give in.
We born in sin,but we got to ask for forgiveness.
An we didnt bring the dope in the hood the white man did.
We born black an ain't owning shit,but the white man is.
Im tired of this shit! it was all a set up from the begaining!
So whos "wining" the white man is because we all in prison!

Man im getting older an jobs want hire because I been locked up.
Incarcerated and remaining jobless some body got to stop this.
Because they treating us like we opposites.
When God made us all equal ,so why am I profitless?
Looking for work an the proper respect they call us regects.

Im looking for justice because ain't nobody else gone love us.
The whole fucking world is under cover an trying to crush us.
Instead of you giving us some thing you giving us nothing.

You put us in this hole,
Like a rat in a maze with cheese an let us go.
To get us to entrap our selves or inslave our souls.
Either way it goes you got to have some kind of control.
Powers a pot of gold like the sun light an the rain.
Every body want it so Im on the block just to maintain.
Just to regain every thing i lost to the game.
Survival of the fittest my only question is who given names?
:nono:
~Outro~

Some times we end up locked up for trying to live an make money
But if we're told that we can make a change
then why is it so hard to get jobs after release?
I'll tell you why if your a felon you want be hired in most of the cases.
But not all,,,but how can we make it if the world want give us a second chance
Thats why I wrote this because its the truth an it should be told..
Im not racist at all so lets not come at me with that type of feed back.
im just writing the facts so lets make that clear!
Music is a form of expression so im expressing my self through words
I pray every day that God free's man of his evil ways
An guide us in to the path of his will,
God bless you all :thumbup:

Copyright through:ASCAP:2004
Wrote by:Charles moody

daum i guess it takes time to get feed so i'll wait.

Now this is some messes up busines
I know i gave feed to some of you before i posted
Daum can i get a what the hell or some thing?

DEEP. Enough said. DEEP. I liek the structure

thanks atleast some one knows im here,,,i'll return the feed

well if any one wants feed then give i already gave so until i get it im not giving

hmmmmm? looks like every one wants feed,,,but i posted before all of the new shit jumped up an none of yall gave so im not giving

Shit just ain't changed around here....

at all............................................... .........

Im going to lose it real quick an snap like peas on some bitches

I respect this.. FUCK the lazy people who dont drop feedback..
I liked this.. it had emotion.. some tenstion . . decent vocab but it dint need to be complex

But is who is WE? you said about trying to make money and being locked up in jail . . i hope your not fake i hope this is real because. . I had hard times when my family were in trouble i did get tempted to try rob people because ssometimes when your broke as fuck that's the only thing that's comes in your mind.. but you know my mom got the job and now it's all good.. GOD came threw .. so it upsets me when people make fake raps about being broke and having to rob and go to jaill.. so i hope its real
Anyway other than that it was good 8/10.. Peace.

i liked it man....it was deep....you could feel the realness and the emotion in it.......i also hate the fuckers who dont give feed.....i have 2 open mics and no feed on either one......try n return the favor......one is called true life hero and the other is called everything....thanks

Thanks my life has not been the best
but God has taken over an he's really showing me the way
These feeling are real theres nothing fake about hard times
Thanks for the feed an feed back will be given back,, right about now,,,brb

done,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,thanks again for the feed

next,,,,well......???????????????/