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battlefreak 10-20-04 04:28 PM

An ad lib of this site
 
Aight, rapverse.com/from rapbattles.com/I'm in the com-munity/we don't have immunity/this threads in textual territory/you wont find any of my tapes at a car booty/ I'm from the good 'ol blighty/ I don't believe in the Lord all mighty/ anyway/back to this site/ it lets you rap without stage fright/ great replies make you high as a kite/this sites for the heavy and light-weights/ except for bill gates/ and his mates/ anyway/I'm off now/I'm tired/dont wanna be late for work and get fired.

fluidmoon 10-21-04 11:09 AM

This wasn't a poem, it was more like a keystyle for open mic, you could have used more feeling as well as vocabulary, keep up.....1

ThirdDegree 10-21-04 03:39 PM

Not really a poem. More like an open Mic. Anywho not bad, work on ya structure


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