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J.R. Freeze vs D fury
Battle Rules:
due 30 min 10 lines No Crew Votes no reyc No Biting no d/r or crew votes blind spit Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-20-04 at 08:40 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
D Fury has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-04 08:18 PM.
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J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-04 08:20 PM.
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Your gonna die kid, so stick to writtin...
If you ever spit I'd hear you bittin' like Evander did Tyson... U not nice son, and I don't need to know ya race to diss... To me your a faceless bitch like Madonna in that Dick Tracy flick... My amazing wit murders whores, all your lines I heard before... Ya words are poor and ain't worth viewing like tha Source Awards... Your tha worst for sure, I'm tha exact opposite... Cuz when it comes to tha rest I've always lived off of it... Wishful thinkin is useless, in skill i quadruiple you... Complex like rubix-cube,in half I over-lap what you could do in two... Goodluck kid........peace......... |
freeze a savage and I set fire to fury burning his anatomy/
Like being beat by a dude with one arm I am to wrecking you single handedly/ I don’t stop…flowin my verbal arsenal through poison pen syringes/ Relentless… Fury you wouldn’t be a star if your thrown by Chinese ninjas/ i’ve Mastered the basis of the language.. you struggle with roots n prefixes/ With those weak disses, you couldn’t win if I granted you three wishes/ My Lines trigger his nervous system he’s hush and the Kids-timid/ He knows he’s like ‘toilet paper’ he won’t be around when this ‘shits-finished’/ No respect, the lowest form of heavyweight skill…shown on rapverse yet/ If your verse was edited by a teacher, you still wouldn’t come correct/ |
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze
i thought this was gunna be a weak battle cause the weak names, but yall came wit it...yo...at first i was feeln fury, cause he came hard with his punches and multies and shit, but then i read freeze verse and my jaw was dropped thru the whole verse(except at the beginning, fury came harder in the opener category).at the beginning, i didnt know what freeze was talkn bout, but he heated that shit up, and i respect that... freeze took it with harder punches and better structure...thats it fury, you took multies and rhyming creativitie, but couldnt come hard with punches...maybe if this was a vocal battle, i think it would be switched, but im reading this... overalll, this battle was sumthin to remember...bout time i seen sumthin hot, i thought RV was falling apart...good shit yall my bad fury, freeze got you homey aiyo, drop verse in the sig below...feels me im out-1- |
Voted For: J.R. Freeze
d fury: i liked the dick tracy line, bringin it back. and i liked the source award line nice diss and the last line was mad crazy. but the tyson line not feelin at all tyson has been played out also tyson bit evander not evander bitin tyson "If you ever spit I'd hear you bittin' like Evander did Tyson..." jr:came great with rhymin different words like anatomy with handedly syringes and ninja's i could keep goin but you did that through the whole verse very impressive, i liked the stars and ninja line heavy wiehgt line was aight. overall i like the way you both presented your line structure very clean and undersandable. you both did great but just felt jr's a lil more, but d yours was tight, i cant get over your ending line very good but the tyson line was off, but again very good. |
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze
J.R reasons why he got my vote is cuzz his flow came harder and was better good structure you was pretty much hittin on and off D Fury good flow you came pretty good but J.R came harder good flow none yall really hit on them personals nawwww |
Voted For: D Fury
d got diz battl hiz verse wuz sickening yo i lyke dat dick trcy flick line dat wuz pure fiyah u had da better ;uns n personals yo freeze yo verse wuz iight but ya lacked creativty so mah vote goes 2 D |
Voted For: D Fury
my vote goes to d fury, you had some nice punches, your flow was a bit crooked but overall your punches one this for you jr freeze, flow was nice but your punches didnt hit quite as hard, no hate, peace out return the favour and drop a vote on the battle below |
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Voted For: D Fury
d fury won by a far had brought it better then jr better flow structre punches flow all around a good verse jr aight rhymes but not so good wordplay structre is off but keep tryin |
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