subletee vs str8 hood
 

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TOPIC: Broken Home

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The faint sound of a slap travels throughout his home
as he prepares himself for yet another day all alone
Trapped inside of this cage, his parents barely acknowledge him
no knowledge of the real world, his parents path is what hes following
props himself up, seated on his stain covered carpet
drug abusing father so his mind cluttered with garbage
only 3 rooms in his house, living room, bathroom and kitchen
only educated bout 3 things:poverty, drugs and sinning
grooggy eyed he looks in the mirror and recgonizes only a simple
child abused kid with no hope or potential
turns the knob on the faucet a brown substance is released
deceased rodents on the floor avoinds contact with his feet
strolls sluggishly in the kitchen his stomach is growling loudly
surrounded by parents howling, hes ducking fists flying cowardly
skips his meal to go in his room so hes not disturbed
from scrbbling words, this is his feeling of like a bird
this is his freedom from reality the soothing of his mind
describing life while jotting down a few sentences that rhyme
doubts all his ability, could he make it on his own? hardly
so he applies the lyrics that he creates to his family on RV

sab wins
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