*Troop* vs sabotage
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0=K.O

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-22-04 at 01:54 AM

Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in.

sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-21-04 05:56 PM.

if anyone say that you sick they formed it as a question
you say the best left,get it right I'm still present
I'll take ya lil rusty knife, turn it around and i'll hit you
your I.ntelligence aint A.uthentik, like high school dropouts, its A.rtificial
Youre already under my steps, so you cant be too far in the game
Call me Ali cause ima knock you out and have you seeing stars like ya name
Troop awhile ago vanquished the ‘E.R.’
But not even intensive care will help heal these bars


hopefully u'll understand the punches.....

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this is where he ducked..............

*Troop* has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-21-04 10:55 PM.

Attention to the Whole "Comitee of the Wisemen" crew full of No Faced
I'll "Sabotage' Your Entire Affiliation of Records that Arent "Show Cased"
Stop Providing Your Numerous Threat Threads I cant Recognize your Game
A thousand Plus for a Lasic Operation and i Still cant Recognize your Name
Im Eraseing your Attempts to Defeat "T" Stop Proposing the Stakes
Your Not Dangerous like Wearing Cinderblocks and Sprinting on Frozen Lakes
Dimensions of Determination Failed like Pigeon toed Kids
with a Straight Foot
Allowing "Mimesis" to Deliver u Testicular Kisses your Far From "Str8 Hood"

***His Record isnt Showcased
His user title says Recognize the Name
His old name was Str8 Hood
Hes in wisemen comitee Lead by Mimesis

I didnt fix one of the Bars.............................................. .................

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

sab you said at the end of your verse
"hopefully u'll understand the punches....."
i dont understand these.....

"...seein stars like ya name"
"vanquished the 'er'"
explain real quick before i vote

ok troop had way more knowledge about his opponent for this battle he fought a very smart fight you could say, personal disses, and alot harder hits, and t also explains what he's talkin about just case you aint get it, which helps him,
sab even said we hope to understand his puches which says he knows we might not and still doesnt explain. troop get its

his name used to be troop'er'
his name has stars around it

Voted For: *Troop*

one sided battle in my opinion


Troop: stucture messed up towards the end, flow was there most of the time, whole verse was like one big personal which helped, punches was hitting good, tight meta's, fav bar was the proposing stakes/frozen lakes, good opener, tight closer,
8/10


Sabotage: Opener would have been nice if u could have worded it to not be self glorification, structure was fucked up, some words didn't rhyme, flow was off, i've seen better from u, punches rarely hit, few good personals, fav bar was in the game/stars like ya name, closer could have been alot better, i've seen better from ya, 4/10



vote - Troop


return the honest votes, battles are in my sig, no hate, both ya my niggaz

Voted For: *Troop*

Damn good battle yalll.
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Sabotage's opener-
"if anyone say that you sick they formed it as a question
you say the best left, get it right I'm still present"-not really a punch just self glorification 4/10
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your best line-"Youre already under my steps, so you cant be too far in the game"
"Call me Ali cause ima knock you out and have you seeing stars like ya name"-nice personal lil bit off target but still good 7/10
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closer-"Troop awhile ago vanquished the ‘E.R.’
But not even intensive care will help heal these bars"-another self glorification not bad though ima give it 5/10
.16/30
advise-work on you structure and your punches your kinda like me i used to put self glorification shit in my battles to...me and you have the same type of style Direct...but i lost alot of battles doin that shit two and so will you, take them out..
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Troops Opener-Attention to the Whole "Comitee of the Wisemen" crew full of No Faced
I'll "Sabotage' Your Entire Affiliation of Records that Arent "Show Cased"-great opener nice word play good personal direct punch 8/10
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You best line-Im Eraseing your Attempts to Defeat "T" Stop Proposing the Stakes,
Your Not Dangerous like Wearing Cinderblocks and Sprinting on Frozen Lakes-funny shit there man good word play kinda personal 6/10
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closer-Dimensions of Determination Failed like Pigeon toed Kids
with a Straight Foot,
Allowing "Mimesis" to Deliver u Testicular Kisses your Far From "Str8 Hood"-this is what won it for you....damn...good multi good word play exelent punch and personal 8/10
.22/30
advise-none really just work on you punches a lil and your structure.....
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I Vote Troop.....please return the favor with an unbias vote on my battle with Blackwell on the FL...Holla

Uppin for this 3-0 Ko

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

Punches...................this was aight battle not the best i have seen Sabotage u had played lines like ali line....and ER also.

And shit that was worth readin was the line about Wisemen and personal wit his name wasnt that great i seen betta shit from ya T

uppin............................................. .