Shit On My Mind
 

Niggas Worried About Structure
When It’s All About Tha Lyrics
If I LINE My Shit Up In Syllables
Yo Mouth, I’m Going To Hear It
Don’t Get Me Wrong Ya’ll
I Grow Off Tha Feedback
I Ain’t As Cocky As Most Niccas
But My Lyrics Man I Breathe Dat
I Write In Poetry Form
An A Real Rappa Know Dat
Listen Ta 2Pac Man
His Lyrics I Swear They Show Dat
Ad I’m Versatile So No
I Don’t Have No Critiqued Style
(UK) Tha Unknown Now
But Once Known As Tha Unknown Child

let me know wah u thonk

I thought it was wack. Didnt like it.

fix ya structure, flow, vocab and content.

Ure Structre Was Off I Didnt Like It Cause U Rhymed Every Other Line
And Ure Rhymin Was Basic U Rhymed Know Dat With Show Dat U Aint Got No Vocab Up It Man...