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Furious vs Bizzey
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No hate explain votes people Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-21-04 at 04:10 PM Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in. |
Bizzey has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-21-04 10:11 AM.
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Furious has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-21-04 10:11 AM.
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Who’s this kid tryna be, fuck it, I’ll come wit something racist
This bitch fronts in front of more niggas than in the slave ships I’ll destroy ya, remove ya ugly face with my harness So shit, he don’t spit, he vomits up garbage This cat wack, so how did he end up on the top of my shitlist Cuz I only handle the best…not the owners of the herb & newb business & You’re the fittest? Either that or you’re RV’s wack diversion Cuz you couldn’t be hard if you were on the latest PS2 T.H.U.G conversion Is it tough kid, can’t handle it, can’t swallow the truth Cuz fact is, your rhymes couldn’t look good, on a self-made photoshop booth So you joined on the 15th of October, wanting to be dope, ill, & remembered don’t worry, you’ll soon be legendary…as a hall of shame member |
ILL Vocalists? You must be deep-throaterz with SCABIES-n-CRABS (get it?)
With RABIES-n-SCABS from LICKIN'-DICKS of "FAKE"-LADIES-IN-CABS/ Furious-A-FAG that CLICKS-n-DRAGS and SPITS-n-BRAGS bout DICKS-HE-GRABS I'll RIP-n-GNASH these B*TCHES-GASHED (dag!) Your verse stinks like PITTS-&-ASS/ My FIST-IS-FAST when I HIT-n-BASH, so you're "History" like HITLER'S-PAST I'll EQUIP-THIS-MASK and BLAST LYRIC-GAS till' you're dissolved into LIQUID-ASH/ I'll WHIP-n-LASH ya'll like us Blacks wuz when whites said,"YER-SHIP-IS-CRASHED!" LISTEN-FAGS, My vocals are clear-n-SHARP so when I TAWK; Im SPITTIN'-GLASS Thats SLITTIN' ya' neck till' you SPIT-n-GASP; STRIP-n-SLASH ya'll till I see blood DRIP-n-SPLASH/ I DISMISS WRITTEN-TRASH; when Furious, "Drops His", bizzey FLUSHes-HIS-"SH*T"-n-LAUGHS No "Vocals" last when ya' RIPPED-TWICE by THICK-SPIKES that SLICE-WIND-PIPES/ I-THEN-WRITE your momz," They shoulda' watched our boy from SAFE-RANGES I dug their graves, but they buried theirselves IN-IT the MINUTE they clicked **SAVE CHANGES** [beat change] I'm DRILLIN BITCH FAGGETS with SPRITUAL GAGETS and I'm KILLIN THIS WACK KID for a LYRICAL HABBIT. I let LOOSE HEAT at WHO SPEAKS of me" I'm trimin ya record I'll put a end to ur seven like the begining of a NEW WEEK, I'll STORM VERBS TO END HERBS" i teach lessons so prick-learn if u step u'll get-"Burn" like ur FORMER CREW MEMBER, I'll SPLATTER THIS GEEK cus ur CHATTER IS CHEAP" Take the win and leave you "Pissed" off like ur BLADDER IS WEAK, I SLICE NICE when I LAUNCH WITH HARD BLADES" and ur flow is like FIGHT NIGHT cus ur PUNCHES ARE PLAYED just to show yall not fuckin with me I can switch it up bitches |
its over uppin no hate on Furious let the best verse win
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uppin for votes.
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Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: Bizzey
i read fur's first just cause i dont like readin long ass verses and i immediately thought damn thats pretty good, got personal, did research on his opponent came with good hard hits, and very creative, i liked how the lines were clean with structure, not alot of ppl like when ppl work off others shit but i do,and thatsthe glory of goin 2nd, i liked it overall. then i read biz's, truthfully i went into reading his a lil biased cause i dont like readin long verses, but from the start he had me just flowin and killin and flowin some more and still killin and a shit more of flowin it was crazy with flow and hella multi's and oh my god that was off the hook, it was worth the length, he had aight hits, but just really killed this one, there was so much flo and multi's that it almost took away from the battle, but shit this is about talent, and dont get me wrong disses to, and you had both. |
Voted For: Bizzey
bizzey your verse seemed stretched but punches were good. nice vocab and flow good job. furious you had weak punches sorry but you wack and your vocab and flow is also off. vote=bizzey |
Voted For: Bizzey
vote: bizzey, flow was hot multis was hot, punches was average *elevate on them a little something* creativeness was hot but some lines seem repeated..... other then that nice drop... u should battle one-man-band in a multis battle.... frious decent drop some decent lines no multis, no real hard punches but some decent just need an extra or better flip to them, creativeness average but not a bad verse u just wasnt up to par.... but my vote: bizzey.... |
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Voted For: Bizzey
Emcee:Bizzey Verse: ILL Vocalists? You must be deep-throaterz with SCABIES-n-CRABS (get it?) With RABIES-n-SCABS from LICKIN'-DICKS of "FAKE"-LADIES-IN-CABS/ Furious-A-FAG that CLICKS-n-DRAGS and SPITS-n-BRAGS bout DICKS-HE-GRABS I'll RIP-n-GNASH these B*TCHES-GASHED (dag!) Your verse stinks like PITTS-&-ASS/ My FIST-IS-FAST when I HIT-n-BASH, so you're "History" like HITLER'S-PAST I'll EQUIP-THIS-MASK and BLAST LYRIC-GAS till' you're dissolved into LIQUID-ASH/ I'll WHIP-n-LASH ya'll like us Blacks wuz when whites said,"YER-SHIP-IS-CRASHED!" LISTEN-FAGS, My vocals are clear-n-SHARP so when I TAWK; Im SPITTIN'-GLASS Thats SLITTIN' ya' neck till' you SPIT-n-GASP; STRIP-n-SLASH ya'll till I see blood DRIP-n-SPLASH/ I DISMISS WRITTEN-TRASH; when Furious, "Drops His", bizzey FLUSHes-HIS-"SH*T"-n-LAUGHS No "Vocals" last when ya' RIPPED-TWICE by THICK-SPIKES that SLICE-WIND-PIPES/ I-THEN-WRITE your momz," They shoulda' watched our boy from SAFE-RANGES I dug their graves, but they buried theirselves IN-IT the MINUTE they clicked **SAVE CHANGES** [beat change] I'm DRILLIN BITCH FAGGETS with SPRITUAL GAGETS and I'm KILLIN THIS WACK KID for a LYRICAL HABBIT. I let LOOSE HEAT at WHO SPEAKS of me" I'm trimin ya record I'll put a end to ur seven like the begining of a NEW WEEK, I'll STORM VERBS TO END HERBS" i teach lessons so prick-learn if u step u'll get-"Burn" like ur FORMER CREW MEMBER, I'll SPLATTER THIS GEEK cus ur CHATTER IS CHEAP" Take the win and leave you "Pissed" off like ur BLADDER IS WEAK, I SLICE NICE when I LAUNCH WITH HARD BLADES" and ur flow is like FIGHT NIGHT cus ur PUNCHES ARE PLAYED Comments: um i think that to took this because you literaly took this....in my opinion you shouldnt even be battlin cats like furious because your more elevated then he is...and make is shorter i was getting bored...lol Marks: Wordplay - 7/10 Metas - 7/10 Vocabulary - 7/10 Structure - 4/10 Punches - 6/10 Opener - 7/10 Closer – /5/10 Personals – 6/10 Enjoyment – 3/10 Creativity - 7/10 Overall - 59/100 ----------59% Emcee:Furious Verse: Who’s this kid tryna be, fuck it, I’ll come wit something racist This bitch fronts in front of more niggas than in the slave ships I’ll destroy ya, remove ya ugly face with my harness So shit, he don’t spit, he vomits up garbage This cat wack, so how did he end up on the top of my shitlist Cuz I only handle the best…not the owners of the herb & newb business & You’re the fittest? Either that or you’re RV’s wack diversion Cuz you couldn’t be hard if you were on the latest PS2 T.H.U.G conversion Is it tough kid, can’t handle it, can’t swallow the truth Cuz fact is, your rhymes couldn’t look good, on a self-made photoshop booth So you joined on the 15th of October, wanting to be dope, ill, & remembered don’t worry, you’ll soon be legendary…as a hall of shame member Comments: ok um...well i can safely say you put in a fight i was gonna vote for you but then i read bizzeys long ass verse...which he should shorten btw and then i decided to vote for him...you dont need to really work on anything just elevate... Marks: Wordplay - 6/10 Metas - 6/10 Vocabulary - 6/10 Structure - 7/10 Punches - 5/10 Opener - 7/10 Closer – 5/10 Personals – 6/10 Enjoyment – 6/10 Creativity - 4/10 Overall - 58/100 ---------58% |
ayo return the favor in the sig...much appreciated.....
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Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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