my life
 

my live is a picture in a frame people say thers something wrong with my brain waiting for it to be recliamed i m waiting for the road to frame so i get back on track but keep sliding off trying to go somewhere but keep braking down stopping my life from turning round don t think of me as the classclown you don t know me don t judge me i m just trying to find the key to life don t want to die by the nife or the gun it aint fun and i give my thanks to god for my life for being not with that kid with that nife sick dream thank god i didn t get arrested that night its like i have to fight for my live 12 years old carrying a nife what a delight out to get me for my legs lying in bed thinking of a horrible death

its alright you could do better

how that thats what you call speaking your mind 100%

lol tru tru...it was good...i mean short but otha than dat was an iight peace...need to work on da vocab a lil bit...n well get a structure....otha then dat..good 1

thanks bruv i looked at your shit that is fucking good bruv you a real gangster thanks lil c

Yo nice drop. FOr real the strucuture made it a bit off. THe vocab was mediocre at best but other than that heardt felt. Stay up

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nu who are you cheers for the advice

now i tried to be nice that shit was wack get off the site bitch