surgical vs Reloaded
 

Battle Rules:
UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-24-04 at 02:34 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Reloaded has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-21-04 02:48 PM.

i spit venomus fluid/
bitch you cant step to me so dont do it/

ill unload bullets into your chest if you fuck with me/
then lil nigga it will be time for your surgery/

this fucking battle is high stakes like you and Michael Jacksons sex tapes/
Remember that evey doctor and rapper makes mistakes/

This man mad cause my rhymes are dope/
lil bitch aint even got enough post to vote/

this niggas mother is my number one fan/
bitch should decline this battle while he still can/

surgical has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-04 08:24 AM.

From the beginning you see this battle was mine
Cause u basic cable and im on showtime
I steal your life like cars on Grand Theft Auto
Take your breath and make it hard for you to swallow
I'll have your body like the leaves in autum its falling
You talk shit in the restroom but now your stalling
Tired of your rap shit and your little terms
Lysol need to spray your spit cause it filled with germs
An when my punches hit its heavy like a rock hit u
The devil inside of me will make jesus walk with you
You need advice so u go to Staples to find out why your mouth is stuck
They cant seem to understand you u like the Aflac duck
U got to tommorow morning 2 spit shit
Knowin all u gonna to do is copy, paste, and edit

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This was feedback posted for Reloaded
 

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reloaded sucks just give me tha votez

Voted For: surgical

Emcee:Surgical

Verse:
From the beginning you see this battle was mine
Cause u basic cable and im on showtime
I steal your life like cars on Grand Theft Auto
Take your breath and make it hard for you to swallow
I'll have your body like the leaves in autum its falling
You talk shit in the restroom but now your stalling
Tired of your rap shit and your little terms
Lysol need to spray your spit cause it filled with germs
An when my punches hit its heavy like a rock hit u
The devil inside of me will make jesus walk with you
You need advice so u go to Staples to find out why your mouth is stuck
They cant seem to understand you u like the Aflac duck
U got to tommorow morning 2 spit shit
Knowin all u gonna to do is copy, paste, and edit

Comments:
well overall i think that you took this...elevate more in all areas besides structure...you just had a better verse than he did.

Marks:
Wordplay - 0/10
Metas - 4/10
Vocabulary - 4/10
Structure - 4/10
Punches - 5/10
Opener - 5/10
Closer – 4/10
Personals – 5/10
Enjoyment – 4/10
Creativity - 4/10
Overall - 39/100
-----------39%

Emcee:Reloaded

Verse:
i spit venomus fluid/
bitch you cant step to me so dont do it/

ill unload bullets into your chest if you fuck with me/
then lil nigga it will be time for your surgery/

this fucking battle is high stakes like you and Michael Jacksons sex tapes/
Remember that evey doctor and rapper makes mistakes/

This man mad cause my rhymes are dope/
lil bitch aint even got enough post to vote/

this niggas mother is my number one fan/
bitch should decline this battle while he still can/

Comments:
well i think u lost this one because of your structure and..shit well you just loss thats all i can say...just elevate and go to the tutorial...

Marks:
Wordplay - 0/10
Metas - 3/10
Vocabulary - 2/10
Structure - 2/10
Punches - 3/10
Opener - 2/10
Closer – 2/10
Personals – 3/10
Enjoyment – 1/10
Creativity - 0/10
Overall - 18/100
----------18%

V/SURGICAL

ayo return the favor aight...the battle is in the sig...much appreciated.