MERCenary vs illuson
 

Battle Rules:

6 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-25-04 at 03:25 PM

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MERCenary has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-04 03:26 PM.

illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-04 03:27 PM.

illusion is shit and he whipes my ass with his damn hands gettin turned down by all these bands.
your small even when you expand aight nuff with the slut shit i son you own you you nuthin but sand.
you say i suck while you got merked by my little noob ass bro with his head you he said he cant stand.
you aint got no disciplinary but you still dont use explicit shit what the fuck is wit dat shit.
back off you aint ever gonna get clit maybe over the internit but other than that no such shit bitch.
no one would feel sorry if a bitch walked up and spit in your face cuz i jus spit on your shoe i won you gotta admit.

save ya breath kid im here for a reason ya my target and its huntin season/
im cumin at ya show me offense every word ya say is non sense ill expose every mistake ya put in ya context/
im the real superman u aint nothin but clark kent i got 4 quaters ya half time like 50 cent/
ya the poster child for the birth control pill ya go down quicker than a ho for a 5 dolller bill/
i aint no illuson im real incase ya didnt get it
beat ya so bad make ya right hand look pathetic/
my are massive with complexibilty ya cant match my abilty ya used to runin 8 miles im a marathoon ya cant fhinsh me/

uppin for votes

Voted For: illuson

since i return all HONEST votes, and some, i guess i gotta vote on this battle...kids, lets not fool yourself, ya names arent the only thing weak, but no hate, i wasnt feeling yalls flow...the whole structure of each flow was poor, and i think everyone will agree with me when i say elevate, but no hate coming from me, yall did ya thang, and ya tried, but i think yall should write down hella rhymes and punches and shit on a paper, then come bac and battle someone, go advance yo vocab
on the brighter note, i voted for illuson, because he dropped a punch in there that made since, altho it was worded bad. something bout "i got 4 quaters and you coming up short like 50 cent..." or at least thats how i wouldve worded it...ya structure fuked up the whole verse for you
merc, same for you...structure was it, you was just speaking something to me, not really a verse...you know what, fuck the nice shit...dawg, rappn's not you, stick to your day job, the shit was wack

but dont let this be the reason to not vote. yall should learn from negative and postive feedbac...i do...and drop votes on some of my battles folks...im out

Voted For: illuson

mercenary you need to structure your lines better for sure and you so called "battle diss" sounded to me more like straight bitchin, you aint hit worth shit, your flo is all fucked and choppy.

your hiits werent that hard, but everyone has there off day, you rhymed "get it" with "pathetic" i liked that it shows skill

mercenary last line sucked for a ender, you have yo kill with a last line and ill seems like he tried to.

i see illuson had one rhyme lines you should break that up so ppl can read it with more flow, like the first and last lines, it really helps,

those votes arent explained. dammit he didnt have nuthin.

Voted For: illuson

Return of the voter....

ya the poster child for the birth control pill ya go down quicker than a ho for a 5 dolller bill/
^^Best line. Not a one personal. Metas were non exisent. Flow was okay. 50 lines r played, someother =lines were okay.
4/10

no one would feel sorry if a bitch walked up and spit in your face cuz i jus spit on your shoe i won you gotta admit.
^^^Only mediocre line. Nothing good at all. Whack whack whack.no personals and sand and band? are you outta materail?? 3/10

One word-ELEVATE

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This was feedback posted for MERCenary
 

you need elevation. MERC your lines were streched. fixx that and yourdown. LOL