~Feed back is like money its hard to get~
 

~Introductions~
I cant get feed back so im not going to give it
So I have a few questions to ask
Theres no need to act like you dont see this posted


~Verse~

Why cant I get feed back when yall know that i give it?
I never asked for first place and Sh*t,so F*ck a blue ribbon.
All im trying to receive is love and a touch of recognition,
Where is the hope,how can I make it if yall want listen?
An why do I got to shed tears to get you to hear me?
I got a heart just like you so F*ck fronting with feelings.

Why cant you understand me like I understand you?
My feelings are hurting when all I tried to tell is the truth.
I speak from my heart so aint nobody dissing your crews.
The storm been posted a month but only got feed from two.
Im pissed off an really feeling more diesel then fuel,
An kind of bitter like a bad taste in between chews.

Im looking out my window while the rain is falling,
Trying to find an angle to smile upon me because the whole world stalling.
An why do I have the heart to pick you up when you falling?
Because im a leader, but God is the only one that I follow.
Reason being its up to him for my eye lids to raise tomorrow.
I might be upset a bit but God eraces my sorrow,
To assure me that every thing in the world isn't all hollow.

So why diss me after most of yall read this, im serious?
We need each other just like Cathy Lee needed Regis.
An why talk about me if you know you truley cant beat me?
An why is it that cowards operating mostly in secret?
Spending half of there life time trying to find my weakness!
I have none so go ahead an get your ryhmes deleted.
I want be beaten im trying to save your faces completely!
Half of my heart dark but most of my soul is walking with jesus.
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So dont play me cause I dont mind bringing the war,
the hell with this rap board I can bring it strait to your door!
An put the nails in the floors where the carpenters missed,
Then put a bomb in your mail box because im hot on the bricks!
Aint none of yall really good enough to even shut me down,
Im like a bank to this site putting a lean on your house!
I got love for you dont get it twisted.
This is just in case some body steps up,because im gone get him missing!
Then cut your balls off an hang them on your trees for christmas
You wanted to get high an shine well heres your chance to fill it!
I got more power then rhino's combined with gorillas.
You gay as Jay z an my competition couldn't rocca a fella!
So dont make me swell up an smash a young seeds water melon!
An demonstrate what hapen to fakes when they claim there felons!
:nono:
So get off of my block cause aint nobody listening to you.
Unless you spitting political or some what ripping the truth.
You say you gangster but you aint got a chip on your tooth?
Plus you got a dentist appointment, because this months due.
So who in the hell you young mutha F*ckas trying to fool?
You probably still living at home an jacking off in your rooms!


Cause I done seen it every body always trying to be thugs.
In your rooms behind your pc's and you fronting for what?
Looking for love when your asses want even give it to sale.
So how can you expect the same thing from some body else?
This Sh*t has got to change so tell me why you all for your self?
An until you do that you will never get the chance to excel.
So make your wish alone with your pick an throw this in your well
Hate can no longer move but the love in you will always prevail.
An If you believe that then you can save your souls from hell.
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You know we cant live for ever ,so lets make a choice,
You can choose to fight for no reason or lift every voice.
Im saving my self for the truth because the lies is killing us.
An young kids is dieing in the streets from trying to be villains.
You on a rap site fronting while the streets is killing.
Repping this an that set, when you aint even had the experience!
Listen, im just trying to open up an help save the children
An God speaks through me so I dont mind showing my healing.

So whats the matter is it hard for your pride to swallow?
An does it bother you that some body else cares for tomorrow?
Half of yall skeptic because you dont believe God exist.
I feel for you knowing its gone be your souls at risk!
An why you skepticize so daum much the only thing you believe in,
Is what you can see or your hands can touch.
Well what about love you cant even touch or possibly hold it.
So how can you say that its so then im only trying to be open?
Its true you only beleive in what you can prove in theory.
You love your families so why you cant love God with feelings?
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~Outro~

I thank God every day because he wakes me up to see the sun rise,
And its because of him that I can change my ways,
I write from my heart an not from my anger
some times when i write im pissed off but i write to make a difference
Not to cause distruction ,
So if you read this please give feed back to others
But always put God first in any thing you do even when posting flows
God bless you all

Copy right/2004 through ASCAP
Wrote by Charles Moody

Well i kind of feel like biggie now,,,because it was all a dream
thinking im getting feed back from any one,but in case i do thanks
if not fuck it.

hmmmmmmmmm?.............................
no feed but every one keep posting an shit looking for feed
if you give you shall recieve i gave but aint getting
but its all good i'll just keep it at the top till some one gives
you know who you are......

wat up 5.very impressive expression.im feelin' it

I read some of it... seemed good.. vocab was good, content, flow, all fine.

Good job.

Thanks i'll return the feed

Come on people the feed is working now i feed those who feed me
Just check the board its done,,,
so yo show some love on this or atleast give me a what the hell....lol

wellll,,,,???/..................

Daum i give my self more replys then any one else gives me

This is pising me off if you want feed back
please give it i always do,,i give before i post
But yall just writting an writting daum

Speak and write plus on the street fight for my possessions
Got a plan best but hidden like a manifest written for future aggression
In a fun zone to party with an unknown body of grammar
At clubs Bacardi will hammer brains a cup of the mama gamma
Is lame, my character in America is to stay drunk and lay
Funk by the pound like Rick James with quick aims to slay
Mingle fact with a single act like the purpose of a circus
Lost stress climbing to the process of rhyming it stir us
Vary with jive dun but terrified of guns they shoot lead
Leave a cemetery polluted with dead cats, stuff incred
Need a plan in a sick nation and good anticipation like Welfare
Stay wrecked with a paycheck on a monthly basis face hell air
Bills thick ill and sick face bitter situation need consideration
Check inflation it came without expectation, being a quitter no elevation

Shit is so true. Dont no one give feedback. I was feelin it though, it was all tight. Flow and structure were on. Only problem i had is that it was long as fuck, but that aint a bad thing.

thanks for the feed i'll return it i promise

feed back wouldnt hurt come on is this site dead or what

yo man ure ryme makin tears fall from my eyes cos its sooooooooooooooooo fukin true, plus i lyked ure vocab, man y iz feedback so fukin hard 2 get?????????