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A Cause Fading(the mainstream prevails)
Art for the ears, set apart from your peers~
stark, in the rear of all intelligence, to be kept darkened and feared~ marked with a tear, silenced by visual aids within the carcass of sheer..~ happiness; but its harder to veer away from something that’ll inevitably start to appear~ searching underneath the carpet reveals masterpieces swept aside~ kept in mind, a failed transition, variegated by the ripples sent in time~ the pendant tied to the pendulum binds the penance, it tries to render them blind~ remember your find cuz the sentence’ll hide wisdom from those with pendulous minds~ never mind society saying, you’ll never climb the highest peak~ beckoning “find me sobriety entirely, not compromising all that comprises me”~ enticed by she, who dances in red with demons beneath the moons glow~ withdrawing the harmony harming me, penetrating the room slow~ who knows the meaning of life, and why all of the toons blown~ echo meaninglessly across the surface, yet intellectuals, we entomb those~ ive inherited the broom, known all along I failed to embellish falsely~ compelling to all of these inarticulates, ive got a deck that’ll make you fold if not dealt cautiously~ subconsciously awakened, refusing to be sponsoring fakeness~ yet constantly wasted, ive met a vain death often, still not stopping these statements~ its probably greatness, partially distorted when washed ashore~ from the inner sanctums of Atlantis, the currents rock the floor...~ boards loose; don’t stop the war on my account, keep fighting to keep peace a forgotten law~ and bend the rules to prevent cheating, or hit repeat to keep the same shit clocking on~ see Ive forgotten all it is to be human, so I could live like a radical, but not enough so~ cuz I still find myself lost in a realm of materialism, hands glued to the console~ at times used like han solo, a means of transportation from star to galaxy~ dont bark or growl at me, ive developed my own style, so as not to part reality~ a large fatality occurring in the catacombs of the music planet~ the intangible illusion slammed with the publicists backdrops taking the ruins for-granted~ ive come to the conclusion, granted I had help acquiring the thesis~ artists commit themselves to the sole purpose of pleasing all those who were once titled a fetus~ my rival is penis, to avoid fucking the red dressed demon who represents the earths people~ if I can drop her jaw in awe rather than panties, then I guess my lyrics condescend the term equal~ |
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That was Dope...But some Line's were a lil stretched-Good Vocab & Wordplay-The Structure Was Off-But Overall It was Pretty Good 7/10.....
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wow...this was pretty deep dawg...feeling the topic and the vocabulary...I had to go grab a dictionary at some parts...lmao...anyways, some bars were stretched, but other than that, this piece was excellent...good job homie...1
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Yo... Fuck, you got some crazy multies... OMB multi master, ha, were both better... But yours were sick, 2 each line, nice... Some deep shit too... I'd give this peice a 8.75/10... (structure a lil off)
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