Rapper ROD vs poison
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-25-04 at 04:10 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Rapper ROD has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 01:09 PM.

I don't hate you i jsut hate what you do,
trying to drop your verses like you drop food,
you pick it up and eat it, knowing its not that good

spitting deaf verses and riding a dead rhyme.
its my time to shine on this little line,
maybe do a similie, then waste my time

i may not be the cream of the crop,
but im the missionary of this battle
and i, for surely, am gonna be on top.

poison has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 05:21 PM.

yo rod ur probably cracked out or Drunk//
ur rhymes stink worst than a skunk//
and more garbage than junk//
battling me is like trying to swim but u sunk//
keep runnin ur trap and get found dead in a trunk//
if this was a ball game i'll give u a slam dunk//
dont try to rap cuz ur just a damn punk//
front some more and i'll make u DROP like RAIN//
u'll be takin drugs just to STOP the PAIN

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Voted For: Rapper ROD

hmmm not many good things can be said about this battle...both of you gotta elevate...and your structures weird...

breakdown...

Rapper ROD
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I don't hate you i jsut hate what you do,
trying to drop your verses like you drop food,
you pick it up and eat it, knowing its not that good
...not really that hard of a punch...but it was...5/10

spitting deaf verses and riding a dead rhyme.
its my time to shine on this little line,
maybe do a similie, then waste my time
....good multis...weird style of punch...6/10

i may not be the cream of the crop,
but im the missionary of this battle
and i, for surely, am gonna be on top.
...haha i like this closer...haha good stuff...8/10

Overal: 19/30
Pretty weak...really got to elevate...you can rhyme but your structure is kinda weird...it flowed allright, and you had a good punch or two in there....

poison
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yo rod ur probably cracked out or Drunk//
ur rhymes stink worst than a skunk//
...horrible vocab, plus it would be worse...not worst...weak...2/10

battling me is like trying to swim but u sunk//
keep runnin ur trap and get found dead in a trunk//
...i really don't understand your second line man....just another weak punch...3/10

if this was a ball game i'll give u a slam dunk//
dont try to rap cuz ur just a damn punk//
....HORRIBLE....JUST HORRIBLE PUNCH....1/10

front some more and i'll make u DROP like RAIN//
u'll be takin drugs just to STOP the PAIN
...good first line...then you threw away anything good possible...3/10

Overal: 9/40
This was quite possibly the worst verse i have ever read...i think you were the one on drugs when you wrote it...elevate a lot...punches were weak...just elevate everything aight...

v/Rapper ROD

WHAT THE FUCK?
THIS GUY DIDNT EVEN RHYME
"do" doesnt rhyme with "good"
and "good" doesnt rhyme with "food"
i dont even know how he a got a vote

This was feedback posted for poison
 

cant vote!! not enough posts but good battle here!

imperal this battle was herb as fuck...and poison your weak as fuck. your verse sucked...you rhyme so basic its not even funny...

at least i rhymed
plus im not even tryin
its not worth spendin my time over battlin some1 thats new

your new too you fuck ass...stop acting like your top shit, you'd get merked by everybody on this site...fuck you got merked by somebody name Rapper ROD....you suck...

if this was a ball game i'll give u a slam dunk//

....first off..i slam dunk is a good thing...so why would you give it to him...? second off its just fucking retarded that you said that...you fucking suck man...give it up...quit this site...its people like you that make it herb

Voted For: Rapper ROD

Yes, I believe this was a definate one-sided battle:

ROD: You came out with the stronger opener and had multies and harder punches than Poison. Try making your lines a bit longer, use better vocab, and try using a different structure maybe. But I can tell you right now...a lot better than your opponents nice work man, I can see you got talent, just gotta work at it, payce.

Poison: I thought this was one of the weakest verses I have ever read, not joking. You are an obvious noob to this site and need to elevate so much dawg. First of all, it doesnt count as a multie if your just rhyming the same word throughout the whole verse, try changing up the rhymes with other words. Next, You need better structuing and definatly better vocab...seriously, your most tech/longest word was "battling", thats weak. Finally, try actually throwing personals and punches in a battle man, other wise it just looks like a very weak freestyle...Your objective is to hurt your opponent with punches...in this case, you hurt yourself. But take what I told you into consideration for next time and GL to you. Payce.

Overall: It is easy to tell who I am giving my vote for here, and that is Rapper ROD, kids got heart, lol. Props to both tho, weak battle. Lates.

Voted For: Rapper ROD

Rapper Rod
Vote Goes To Him Because:
His Structure Was Decent Vocabulary Was Kind Of Basic THough But SOme Good Shit Fam No Punches Really Not That I See Poison Need SOem Elivation Seriously Them"//" Make Ya Verse Look Sloppy Fam So My Vote Is RR

uppin this shit.....niggers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!