fuk a TuniT.
 

TuniT.......at first i was like o.k. maybe this dude is just a hard critic.
then i read OneManBands piece on bruce lee which i thought was creative and funny.it was a good piece.then i scroll down and who the fuk is it that had to be the hater.TuniT.Simon from american idol's illegitimate son.
it's a lot of hot emcee's out there and I can guarantee
:nono:T.U.aiNt.IT] :nono:

next time b4 u judge my shit bitch
ask permission
or u'll find urself choptup like chinese
half a chickens
supposed to be lyve it's ya lifelike
ass im kikin
then open ya' ches' t' see wat life's like
after livin'
fukin' wit Grandz..T-unit,dats a
bad decision
dog my wrath is endless lead to
tragic endin's
and nobody gives a fuk what ya silly
ass is feelin'
i tear thru ya stlye like micheal jackson do da
ass of children.
****fuk u wit' a dirty dick u hatin' ass muthafuka.i would keep goin' but u ain't worth another

i structure my rhymes the way i say them.I ain't sayin' it like dat so i ain't structure it like dat.good look on da feed 1.

oww!!!! I Feel Ya On That One In fact he does it to everyone i think I Think He is simonz son but N E Wayz i Loved someone had to say somethin to light his ass up U Did Great I See no flaws in the flow none in the ryme if u wanted feedback id Give you A 10/10 Keep It Up And Oh Yeah

FUCK T~UNIT YO BITCH ASS HAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wats up with the structure????? its aight i guess........... but it was a decent verse, kinda short compared to most, but ok

thx for da feed back.

Simple rhymes. try to make them hard you kno let people kno you really worked on it.

o.k.thx for the feed.

nice i mean aight.

yea fuck you tunit.

lmao
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appreciate the feeds peeps

*shake my damn head*