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Macca 10-23-04 05:27 PM

Monolo vs Notorious PIMP
 
Battle Rules:

8lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

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System 10-23-04 05:29 PM

Notorious PIMP has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 05:29 PM.

System 10-23-04 05:32 PM

Monolo has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 05:32 PM.

Monolo 10-23-04 05:42 PM

i know how to fight, you can use a knife right?
don't act like ur windpipe, can't be ripped out of ur neck
don't act like you can't get a bullet right through ya head
i'm here for the bread
the butta' the juice
the butta on treis deuce, can knock ya tooth right loose
still in my youth
i've been actin the same daddy, some call me insane
they say i need help badly
you better not half-ass if u tryin to get at me
you pull a knife on me then u better stab me
or if u cockin that toast back then u better blast me
but if u don't want shit then u better just walk past me



Why Am I So Nasty?

Macca 10-23-04 05:52 PM

This faggot cant win one distinctive battle and he is Monolo.
Man you don’t have a abode you live in the lavatory of Conoco.
The reason you live in there is cuz I come around you gotta go.
So I don’t diss you I feel sorry for you cuz you aint gott no dough.
But I’ll still merk you and hit you where it hurts player.
I’ll make you crumble every where bitch layer by layer.
I leave you with no finale at all just bitter life for ever to the end.
Well I’ll notice you on the wall of shame while I’m on the wall of fame.
Until we battle again.

Monolo 10-23-04 05:56 PM

good luck.......u wanna start a crew or not cuz ill ask some-1 else if not..........

The Militant 10-23-04 05:57 PM

Voted For: Notorious PIMP

om bout to battle this kid but ill give em props he nice flow word lay n structre good battle on ya part the other guy was weak but its all good no hate

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Monolo 10-23-04 06:02 PM

thats bull-shit, if ur gonna vote then vote 4 reel

Macca 10-23-04 06:02 PM

aight i'll battle youu illusion 2morow man i cant do 4 battlez at the same time. my head hurtz.

Godz Angel 10-23-04 06:18 PM

Voted For: Notorious PIMP

Notorious got this.... PIMP... your structuer was really good....Ilike it.... A few linez streched........ But its allgood.....

Your punches hit really hard!!!.... Ilike em .....IF i were mono...i would consider myself merked... ha ha

Your flow was reaLLY GOOD ........ i could follow along real well~~..

And your wordplay was realy good...i like it!...

Mono>>>>>

Your structrue was horrible.. sry i hafta lay it down like this ...but yeah it was terrible.....

Your punches didnt relaly hit all that hard but they were in there.. nicetry....

Your flow...i didnt relally feel it.... Wasnt all that prettyy..

Overall I am going to giev this to Notorious for .... Well everyhting... lol...

Peace~~~~

Macca 10-23-04 06:20 PM

sweet i'm getting votes. playing around.

Graphical 10-23-04 06:20 PM

Voted For: Monolo

Notorious PIMP: This faggot cant win one distinctive battle and he is Monolo.
Man you don’t have a abode you live in the lavatory of Conoco.

good 8/10

The reason you live in there is cuz I come around you gotta go.
So I don’t diss you I feel sorry for you cuz you aint gott no dough.

ehh not that good 6/10


But I’ll still merk you and hit you where it hurts player.
I’ll make you crumble every where bitch layer by layer.

good... 7/10

I leave you with no finale at all just bitter life for ever to the end.
Well I’ll notice you on the wall of shame while I’m on the wall of fame.
Until we battle again.

great! 9/10

Monolo: I leave you with no finale at all just bitter life for ever to the end.
Well I’ll notice you on the wall of shame while I’m on the wall of fame.
Until we battle again.

GReaT! 9/10

i'm here for the bread
the butta' the juice

its okay.. 6/10

the butta on treis deuce, can knock ya tooth right loose
still in my youth
i've been actin the same daddy, some call me insane
they say i need help badly

another Great! 9/10

you better not half-ass if u tryin to get at me
you pull a knife on me then u better stab me

its good 8/10

or if u cockin that toast back then u better blast me
but if u don't want shit then u better just walk past me

hot 9/10

Overall: Monolo

Macca 10-23-04 06:23 PM

man you dont kno shit we aint the same person.

Monolo 10-23-04 06:24 PM

i still think mine was betta, no offence..........

Macca 10-23-04 06:29 PM

none taken its good to think that but dont let it go too far.


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