Short Keystyle
 

Short Keystyle

Make flavor by the batch my behavior snatch girls
Like Dentzel on Training Day like to attach pearls
To accomplishments, King Kong got nothing on me, hurl
Helicopters, stem fire great thrilling from on top empire
State building my strength grows iller than a gorilla’s desire
Immerse in water while my verse slaughter worlds
Flow wrong wilding is like prolong howling a wolf
In disguise, cats I amaze with tune then bathe my wounds in iodine
From battle, crave for saloon to get wine before I saddle divine
Ponies ride and duck blind phones but known to rattle minds
With battle rhymes

I dont know. Structure was cool but just a little off, I was feelin the surreal shit till about halfway through then it got a little old but i aint gonna judge it on that.
Above average vocab and some nice word placement in the first half. I give it a 7 out of 10.

Not really feelin this. It's actually pretty boring.
Use some multis or meta's to make it a more exciting piece ...

AutoMATIK™ MAYBE YOU DIDN'T READ THIS ALL KINDS OF MULTI'S IN HERE UT DO YOU KNOW WHAT MULTI'S ARE?