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Golden shellz 10-24-04 05:01 PM

Freestyle- This is fire trust a lotta ppl said it was hot
 
look im tired of these cats swearin that they hot
they write 10 lines and swear that its gonna be a drop
dont say that u nice, word to mother dont say that
im like chemical fusions i make these cats wanna react
dont be jealous
yall really think i wont harm yall fellas
2 shots not from glocks, pop 2 barettas
u cats aint the truth most of yall are cowards
when u see me in d hood, u got any idea wat ill do to u cowards?
i got glocks, that spit shots
from blocks, to hardtops
if u claim u gangsta, u talkin bout stuff u aint got
some people talkin up a storm, stuntin with a bottleg uzi
cuz i take cats underground, like they was buying a bootleg movie
i could spit half a track and let the other half sit
its like tales of the CRYPT, the way i fill so many caskets
no mercy for these rappers, cuz i have no remorse
cuz i be invading crews, like i was the trojan horse
i pausefor a second. then i slide on back
i could make this one of my tracks, nah chill ima fall back

BkBrawla 10-24-04 05:44 PM

aight aight i good flow nice words going............da words could of been betta.......da words was basic......needs vocab............but good shit here i give dis an 7/10 cause u didnt had no vocab pluz it wasnt an good struture but anyway good shit good flow


put an feedback in my open mic'z

the lightning
and
women abusing

i'll preciate tha feedback..............word

Scareface 10-24-04 05:46 PM

I Like That Rii Durr Its all True To a I Feel Dat Mayne 4real And If Ya Wanted feed Back Id Give Ya a 9/10 Stay Up

Golden shellz 10-24-04 08:16 PM

thanx for da feedback iight upin for feedback


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