Armaggedon(quick 6)
 

a little something i wrote about the world coming to an end.


i dream of pyramids that peirce through the sky/
splite open the universe witness galaxies collide/

watch continents crumble and get swollowed by the seas/
stars erupt like volcano's, the earth bleeds/

watch the clouds splite apart and the sun melt whats left/
the ocean boils with tempatures that leaves the god of the seas impressed/

dream of pyramids that peirce through the sky/
splite open the universe witness galaxies collide/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE FLOW RIGHT THERE WORDS TOO BASIC THOUGH ELEVATE USING VOCAB








watch continents crumble and get swollowed by the seas/
stars erupt like volcano's, the earth bleeds/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ YA LINES A LIL STRETCH ITS MESSING UP DA FLOW U NEED TO GET MORE CREATIVE WITH THIS PIECE GET MORE IMAGINARY,,,,,,WORK ON VOCAB TOO












atch the clouds splite apart and the sun melt whats left/
the ocean boils with tempatures that leaves the god of the seas impressed/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ERM AGAIN TOO STRETCH LENGTH YA LINES MAKE IT SHORT

GET BETTA WITH VOCAB MAYNE

thanks bk,for the info, lets hear some more yyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaa

Ghetto Cripple Can Ya Put An Feedback In My Open Mic

The Death Night P.2...........plz..........word I'll Preciated Since I Put An Feedback On Yours

yea for sure, this is how i do it, im'a try to get more on this open mic shit.

lets get some feed back on the creativity and shit. wat ya'll think.

lets stop dazzin, lets hear it, rate this shit for real.

halla at this shit ya'll lets get it crackin up in this shizzle.lol