teckniquess vs untouchableflowz
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-27-04 at 09:50 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

u said just set it up in that thread so here it iz....good luck dog...

UntouchableFlowz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-04 10:09 PM.

teckniquess has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-04 10:10 PM.

yo jus sit back and chill get ready for ur first L//
my lyrics r so hot after i get done its will feel like hell//
mayday mayday is there a doctor anywhere around//
hes bout to choke on my flow like a pound(chronic)//
bitch i'm already crowned da king of dis rap game//
my rhymes r bout ready to crown u shame of dis rap game//
hold up stop wait a min. go look at my vocabulary//
dawg u couldn't read me if i was a dictionary//
u couldn't smoke me even if i was grass//
u could take 2 hits and choke off my ass//

opener:
like 70's remedy's bout 2 b off wit ya head like kennedy
he aint got untouchableflowz he jus a scholar in serendepity

killer:
this disturbed newb iz tryin 2 start an impossible feud
my verbal words will screw ur brain cells till u yesterdays news
this kid couldnt catch a flow even if he had finz
he aint sick dats just uncontrollable body funtinz(functions)
im ringin dis niggaz bell like a musical conductor
even wit hammer&nails he couldnt build a good structure

closer:
teck's a notorious great,u just a worriless-fake
game over,its checkmate & embarassments ur fate

my fault if u dont know what i meant by serendepity
dictionary definition is
serendipity=an asumed talent for making discoveries on accident...
and other than that I am UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN THIS BATTLE

Voted For: teckniquess

damn..... sorry but teck just ripped this..

"this kid couldnt catch a flow even if he had finz
"
^niiiiice

hes bout to choke on my flow like a pound(chronic)//
^wtf , most pot smokers dont cough unless they hold it in, but still, ya'll cats shouldnt have to explain what you spit. sorry but that pisses me off (constructive critisism, dawg)

vote/Teck

can ya'll vote on my battle thx http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=157279

Voted For: teckniquess

tack took this eaisly more compleix rhyme style better wordplay beter structre better metas
king came weak here he usally comes harder didnt like his spit very much

Voted For: teckniquess

teck came a lil harder... untouchable urs was kinda basic and punches werent as hard hittin...teck had some better vocab too, no hate to niether....good drop from both!