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GIVE ME SOME POSITIVE CRITICISM, RATE THIS: CREATIVITY-FLOW-WORDS-WORD PLAY-OVERALL.

do you believe in the sand man, fairy's or spirits/
those are the reasons i wear a cross around my neck, you best believe it/

some call it a "holy war" not the one on t.v./
the one with angels and demons, the war over me/

spontanious combustion, poof you gone/
is it from the sun bein' to hot or hell's breathin' lungs/

lets get some feed back from you, hit it up.

Alright, its got points for creativity, but it almost couldnt keep up with itself. I wanted to see more. What it could really use is more creativity in the words, only because the topic itself is so different. But overall i liked it.

yo kill feed pun man he goin to die.i was thinkin of hittin me up with a rappa, but i really dont understand what its for. what is it for? an wat u supposed to do?

what do ya'll think hit me up with some info