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Heavyweight Championship: Triple N .vs. Sdizzle
EDIT YOUR CHECK IN WITH FOUR VOTES...
or I will murder you in your sleep... Rules. Read & Good Luck Check Ins Are Due Wednesdays By 12 Midnight Eastern Verses Are Due Fridays By 12 Midnight Eastern Voting Ends Sunday At 12 Midnight Eastern |
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Checkin' in...u beat me?....u must be dillusional...lmfao
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157342 |
i unno man........... he might do it.....
Freepost in here again and you will be suspended for a week -iky |
his swings for the fences to no avail, so hes forced to start bunting
triple N eh? never wins, shows newbish qualities, and is just nothing whoop your ass *lol* we know im beating you, but how badly? REAL BAD when my opponents punches are just random letters like his avy how hes the champ? is this a joke? these are just some of the questions the whole board want to know kid put breathe in his sig, its the only time hell have a fabolous video now hes the master of punchlines? it gets worse he lacks........ personals, flow, style ,structure, intelligence, punches directed at his oppoent, finesse, composure, comprehension the list could continue, but it would fill up my whole verse you were spared last week by god, but now hes acting all hsyterical but two weeks in a row Triple N would need more than a myrical |
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=156117
This personal will never die^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ He is a bigger collection of useless lard than liposuction waste bins But he's always posts happy cuz when he sits down his stomach grins(belly rolls) This fat version of clark kent clearly let himself go so he pawned his cape It use to glide in the wind..now its like suicidal inmates, it can't take da wait(weight) He can't move so he stays online all day lookin' for miricale diet to appear Dats why he always posts "a-head" cuz he ain't seen his body in years Ya structure's legacy's like ya weight gain...it leaves a stretched mark SDizzle stands for Steak & Donuts, yellow color in user title reps his farts Don't wine at me like u did soco sayin' " all fat jokes are played & wack" Cuz played means no longer relevant...and guess what?....your still fat!!! |
Yes I edited it becuz for some reason when I posted it every line crowded around the link I provided an it was unreadable....so hopefully I don't get DQed but goodluck to S Dizzle
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sdizzle
his swings for the fences to no avail, so hes forced to start bunting triple N eh? never wins, shows newbish qualities, and is just nothing ery1 trys it...no whoop your ass *lol* we know im beating you, but how badly? REAL BAD when my opponents punches are just random letters like his avy nice how hes the champ? is this a joke? these are just some of the questions the whole board want to know kid put breathe in his sig, its the only time hell have a fabolous video decent now hes the master of punchlines? it gets worse he lacks........ personals, flow, style ,structure, intelligence, punches directed at his oppoent, finesse, composure, comprehension the list could continue, but it would fill up my whole verse funny but no you were spared last week by god, but now hes acting all hsyterical but two weeks in a row Triple N would need more than a myrical nope Triple N He is a bigger collection of useless lard than liposuction waste bins But he's always posts happy cuz when he sits down his stomach grins(belly rolls) ok This fat version of clark kent clearly let himself go so he pawned his cape It use to glide in the wind..now its like suicidal inmates, it can't take da wait(weight) ok He can't move so he stays online all day lookin' for miricale diet to appear Dats why he always posts "a-head" cuz he ain't seen his body in years decent Ya structure's legacy's like ya weight gain...it leaves a stretched mark SDizzle stands for Steak & Donuts, yellow color in user title reps his farts no! Don't wine at me like u did soco sayin' " all fat jokes are played & wack" Cuz played means no longer relevant...and guess what?....your still fat!!! ok but bored with it V/ dizzle Okay Triple...u went at him being fat the whole time...it got boring after the 1st bar...gotta go at him from other concepts to win...dizzle came witty in places... |
Damn I knew if I came half ass this^^^^would happen...same shit every battle, I shoulda listened to my fist mind.
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well check this this is an honest vote
Sdizzle Your shit was ill i was feelin it...i dont like that structure though and you had some OK vocab..wordplay was nice...personals...ok.....punches was dope......meta's decent...this shit was aiight fam...i thought this shit was a lil above average..... triple: I gave this win to you Because Your personal and Your Opener..the stomache grin line was dope....that shit boht had me crackin up so i gave this too you because you came much harder ....your shit was nice...punches hit em hard...personal DOPE...metas decent.....wordplay nice....vocab..ok Vote: Triple N |
UPPING lol .
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ok.. can i just say.
SDIZZLE BEING FAT PUNCHES ARE PLAYED we've been through it, and heard all the dizzle punches there is... they were funny the first time.. but not anymore.. dizzle came alright, some blah shit.. some alright shit... triple N based his concepts on dizzle being fat, although he had other shit.. i didnt feel it much.. v/dizzle |
aight,
dizzle, first off--good verse, but the sturcture coulda definitely used some improvement.....i didnt really find anythin outstandin, but u had good vocab...along wit decent personals n punches the whole way thru, so u had good consistency... Triple, ya verse was straight too...structure was good, but...the fat jokes got REAL old...especially since i've seen A LOT against sdizzle...i mean shit, u had good consistency, but in my eyes, u were jus sayin "you're fat" "you're fat" wit each bar...it was aight wit the first bar or two, but then it got real played... V/ sdizzle... |
Closed. Sdizzle wins.
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