oreo's qiuk freestyle
 

im trying to be the best in the game by far/
the rest of yall can kiss your chances goodbye(MUAH)/
i shine bright, deserve to be in the sky im a star/
fresh hooks stay coming out my mouth like a gar/
take your shots to me it's just metal in the air/
you caint compare, it;s the truth so dont dare/
kings always comes out on top like game of solitare/
when i spit call me a youngblood cuz all you hear is Damn/
and the beef in the hood, i can that shit like it was spam/
a killa like cam, i can even eat rappers ghost like pac-man/
no cops catch me im sorta like the hood ginger-bread man/
hoes know i keep that white fluid shootn out like spiderman/
when i step up to a microphone they all know its a montrosity/
hate all you want,even behind me they front,i feed off animostity/
speed to fame and glory,caint slo down i gotta reach the top veloctiy/
couldnt even reach boardwalk before me at home by playin monopoly/
im a tragic lto the game like the two plane highjakers of 9/11/
i wont die soon,aint my time ill hide under the stairway to heaven/
you all got blood in your body, my veins carry petroilium/
in my hood when cats step up they the same hieght as nepolian/

quikfreestyle rop some thoughts

upin...get at it

dat was a good freestyle.

u got mad talent..i mean yea ive seen better n all but otha than dat its good.....nice vocab..u can work on the structure a lil but otha than dat...good piece...9/10..keep it up

thanks yall uppin some more feedback

upin.............................. :thumbup:

some feed yall..............

feed on it.............................

I liked except for that / stuff at the end of the lines but good overall

thanks i do that its a habit to end my bar that way

feed back ill do the same

''my penis is the size of a peanut...have u seen it?...fuck naaaw you aint seen it!..its the size of a peanut..''

:)

^^^^ wat the fuck lol thats giong in my sig lol

lmaoooo!!
u freeposted on my dope man OM, so i returned the favor
pretty tight freestyle by the way

peep my shit that i'm gonna post in the OM in about 5 minutes lol

aight then dopey