Lil Bitz vs Carnage
 

:shoot: Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No D/R

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-29-04 at 09:52 PM

Must drop verse in 5000 minutes after check in.

Lil Bitz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-26-04 04:18 PM.

Carnage has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-26-04 04:19 PM.

Ima dog, about devour your ass like lil bitz and kibbles/
Ho, u go wit rap like big tits go wit little nipples//
If dis is "fight night" y the hell i gotta "fight dike"/
Im about to dunk dis little bitches flow "like Mike"//
U battlin is like a blind man tryin to see me/
U from Washington? Well your punches land as good as terrorist planes in D.C.//
U 'Furious' and 'serious', cuz i said dat u got lil tits and a 'period'/
Call me da shredder cuz your rhymes come in whole and leave in "pieces"/
Ill have dis bitch lost in a car trunk, so fuck a "Reeses"//
Listen, U gotta 99% of gettin killed like germs in "listerene"/
Im "sickining", u just got fried and popeyed like a "chickenwing"//


uppin

okay here it goes. yeah yeah yeah

carnage i dont like u, im just tryin to be real
just gonna spit a lil verse just to show u how i feel
im hardcore dog, ill take ur head and bust it through the wall
i bet when u go and use the bathroom, u piss on ur ball
dont think cause ima a girl that im some shit
cause if u still thinkin that then im introduce u to lil bitz
u lil shit
if my rhymes were dirt u be diggin it like a shevel
u lost this battle so take some time off to get on my level

Voted For: Carnage

aight,
Lil Bitz...u had a nice attempt, i can tell you're a beginner...but u need to elevate...there was nothin in your verse that stood out as bein real good...the punches were all weak n played, u gotta be more creative wit those...n half the time it was like u were jus doin random freestylin cuz u werent really dissin him.........Carnage, not a bad verse...again, i didnt really see anythin special, but u at least made okay attempts at punches...anyways,

V/ Carnage, for better overall verse n for hittin his opponent every time...no hate, jus honest feedback...

Aiight son thnx lets get somemore votez!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Carnage

good battle

punches- carnage easily u had harder hittin and more of em
personals- neither
multis- carnage, u had em
metas- carnage u had more and better ones
humor- carnage, i didnt laugh but i smiled
flow- carnage, everythin worked better
structure- carnage, not the best ive seen, but not the worst

Carnage good drop overall. lose the // thing though. some of your wordin wuz sketchy, but overall a 6.5/10

Bitz u self glorified more than anythin. need to work on punches, structure, and flow. overall a 2/10

No hate just an honest voter.

pz

Voted For: Carnage

carnage got this battle

carnage-okay good punches were good for a newb.but as expected from them rhyme was basic and so was wordplay but better than lil bitz's....personals were good and flow was okay work on that some...structure was off work on that too same with wordplay but good drop for a newb 7/10

lil-okay you had a very very very basic drop rhyme scheme was very simple...punches were real weak...you misspelled shovel purposely to rhyme it with level...no personals.....flow was off...structure was horrible..and try not to self glorify it takes from it sometimes unless you incorperate it right....but elevate baaadddly...work on structure/punches/vocab/wordplay/and personals

you both need to elevate

v/carnage

return the vote..battle in my sig...honest explained votes only....
graci
Peace~1

Aiight son favorz will be returned. Thnx For tha votes and feed bak.

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This was feedback posted for Carnage
 

nice battle. in my opinion Carnage took this one. use more vocabulary lil bitz and keep elevating.

...........u r gay.....

Upping for votes..........

Voted For: Carnage

vote-carnage

reason being:
*lil more effective punches...they was wack as hell...but considering tha level of skill....they hit harder than lil bitz
*more multis
*better/more metaphors
*attempted wordplay
*flowed better

i did lyke these lines from lil bitz:

-tha opener and closer on lil bitz was killin carnages...but he took more catagories....

my advice:....battle vets....elevate..

Voted For: Carnage

lol nice flow carnage this vote goes to you
nice creativity
openin verse funny & tight
structure good just get rid of da / it makes it seem basic
punchlines good
came hard at da opponent
overall it was a good verse

keep doing ya thing dawg & u to lil bitz