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Passions collide, all the tears your eyelashes could pry-
Fashioned to fly, our sandcastle dreams crashed in their tides
Baby it burns to subside in the ashes of lies
A last goodbye fills the night, feeling hollow inside
Writing with borrowed time since tomorrow just died
Chasing emotions with the ocean as I swallow my pride
Follow this life… then maybe you would start to believe
That with you, I could breathe with my heart on my sleeve
The art that’s in me can’t be expressed in this muted mood
Painting your Chocolate complexion- flavored beautiful
A slave to your lips eucharist, a gripped licorice kiss
How I savored its twist and prayed it would stay for a bit
Laying amidst this painful solitude, I watch the sun bloom
Remembering all the days I should’ve said I love you
... and I still do.


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wow,this was beautiful,great vocabulary and i could feel the emotion in this drop, great job on this, it ended so quick, i wanted to read more..lol...10/10...awesome drop man.1"painting your chocolate complexion-flavored beautiful".".A slave to your lips eucharist,a gripped licorice kiss".dope lines..

everything here was fire.flawless.

{wipes the tears from my eyes}
nice

good look on the feedback its appreciated