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S*T*A*Ts 10-27-04 12:05 AM

First OM........Devils tears...... must read
 
From the moment they saw eachother it was Love at first sight
had Dreams of eternal happiness with no worries or fights
lived right outside of town, the little house with the picket fence
surrounded by beautiful flowers that gave the home a wonderful scent
had two lovely children whose ages varied from seven to three
they had the perfect life and perfect home with a swing in the tree
The seven year old got straight 'A's and didn't get into trouble at all
and the three year old was the perfect todler, winter through fall
5 years goes by and the family is still very pefect to the tee
kids are still wonderful and the swing still hangs from the tree
for the children and father life is still extremely happy and perfect
little do they know their stay at home mom is feeling unhappy and worthless
one day as she looks in the mirrior, down her cheek rolls a tear
and she stares at this unhappy face filled wit tremendous pain and fear
she says its time to go and throws the rat poison down her throat
lights and takes a drag from the first and last cigarette she ever smoked
she sits on her bed and writes a letter to her husband as she slowly dies
father and children come home to there biggest fear and endless cries
and her tragic death is the end to this story book family's perfect life
and we find out that some things can even bring 'Tears' to the 'Devils' eyes

OrEo da cookie 10-27-04 12:55 AM

mice peice man, sentimentl stuff/
get at mine
oh yeah, 8/10, i can relate

S*T*A*Ts 10-27-04 02:58 AM

thanx for the feed dawg lets keep it comin........

Loveliss Grandz 10-27-04 10:16 AM

good piece. i liked the twist to the story.keep em' comin'.


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