best/worst day ever
 

ok yall today i found out something that made me so damn happy but then at the same time they told me the worst news ever just read..................

I never even knew you existed until you were gone/
lord this hurts so bad, change wat you did wrong/
knocks on my door by your mothers older brother/
he told me your here but never will see each other/
my seed was planted but never had a chance to grow/
i miss you already but maybe it would be better if i dont know/
this will be the only reconazation of you on earth/
the heavens took you before she even gave birth/
it wasnt gods decsions it was more like your mothers/
now i wont even know how we'd look at each other/
to all who know, this shed my first tear out my eye/
fuck if they say a thug caint cry, they never had part of them die/
missin the chance to hold you, be there hug you/
R.I.P to the other half of me, daddy loves you/

Damn bush and his abortion laws{ wipes tear from eye}

Punchlines

Even as a carpenter you couldn’t build flavor with your
Ill behavior your nails will fail and won’t prevail in hardcore
Wood so your foundation couldn’t clown a nation and will fall
Down all around like broken fence posts rhyme dense most time yall
Your lips closed while my scripts pose a threat in your brain
Blend correct like insects so I swarm in a storm of sore rain
Cats stem whack as dim maniacs I’m above the rim with fact
And impact, I blow a flute while cats flow pollute the site back
And forth like AYLIYAH, even with labels you not able
To true tag my dew rag my Duke grease will rebuke the beast and stable
The legal evil of a bad hair day

wat the fuck is that, this my open mic yo,

wtf maddrapper... anyways.... oreo, u had a good flow in this, u were lackin on the vocab, but this was nice and deep, but i liked it overall.... but vocab could use some work.... nice drop!

it dont need that it was just emotions yo, today i found out i had a soon but found out his mother got an abortion at the same time

uppin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

i'm feelin dis piece partly cause it was a cool emotional piece and cause i also can relate to what u feelin'.Im happy and sad for you.good piece.

i caint see why your happy but aight then

maddrapper been doing that all over the place.lol.

oreo this is some deep ass shit. you got soid rhyme's in this drop.
They are not highly tech . but the doesnt matter in anyway at all because the way you used them is dope.
Is this a true drop?

Fuck abortion ,children are a gift. That wak fuck think's he is god.
FUCK GEORGE.W.BUSH.sue me.
pz

^^^ thanks man yeah it true i only told the girl im with now and thats messing up our realationship but thanks @ you always drop some solid feed,
we need to collab on something

Fuck abortion ,children are a gift. That wak fuck think's he is god.
FUCK GEORGE.W.BUSH.sue me.
pz[/QUOTE]

hell yeah man that is tru as hell FUCK BUSH!!!

some feed yall?

Oreo Good shit hommie nice flow
yea told me last true story huh
it was a good flow stayed on point i rate it about a 8-10 good shit keep doing ya thing

thanks yo man this shit still hurts me

real emotional shit right here..got me goin....dayum.....and pause and think for a bit...im real sorry to hear that...u know.......how old are u anyway fam?