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Dabatos 10-27-04 03:27 AM

10 minute Collab Key-Style / By @ and I. Mind
 

Doesn't Make Sence! Cuz its a freestyle :)

10 Minute FreeStyle :)
By: @ and I. Mind



[@'s Verse]

racial mixture's have diffrent facial fixture's so why discrase your picture's?..
..if leasure create's pleasure then why measure your fate's letter..
I live by a rule to never regret a thing i do or persue..
techinacallity is my speciality so wait for my audio's ..cause i need a vet to battle me..
im here to learn.. not here to burn so if you been hating then here's your turn..
cause a lesson in a confession can bring out a bit of discresion..
but did i mention the poor stoped gettin there pension to create less tention..
but if people start dying then people stop trying and leader's keep lying..
so it's time to put the key in the door. and start freeing a whore..
because she's craving to love.. but when it's frozen theres no saving a dove..


[I. Mind's Verse]

Wut seems to be impossible is possible wen i saw somethin catastrophical...
I saw somethin un-logical, I'n a hospital I saw a baby the size of a popsicle...
these ppl are crazy I'm pretty certain, i hate them, die, i want to burn them..
Shyt, i played wit a knife n i think i killed a person..so i left so made a diversion..
later made a conversion! cops followed me, so i took out my little black pistol..
Aim'd at em not knowin its artificial, its freaken fake, all it does is loudly whissle...
But i don't care, cuz me they underestimated, cuz in my mind i slowly animated..
An escape plan so i know i'll make it,wth? Damn im out of gas..now my life i really hate it...
Wait! Why am i complain'n, imma get 3 meals a day, and have a bet to sleep in...
But why am i still day dreamin? Oh shyt.realized im already in jail!Damn i do to much weed in da weekend...

Dabatos 10-27-04 10:28 AM

upppin upppin upppin upppin upppin upppin upppin upppin upppin upppin upppin upppin upppin

Loveliss Grandz 10-27-04 11:16 AM

nice freestyle collab.keep em comin'.

Ysdat 10-27-04 01:07 PM

upping.
(15 character's)

Ms. Get Gully 10-27-04 01:23 PM

well since it dont make too much sense lol im feeling the rhyme scheme from both peoples ....some of the lines did actually make some sense..nice job up

MADDRAPPER 10-27-04 01:27 PM

The type greedy but like a treaty, unite cats, crew fight
With gatts, a foul toy made of alloy so my rhymes tight
Like mix metals when my fix settles so yall turn on the light
Whack cats don’t trust them I’ve become accustom to hate
Don’t lend money always end funny with me in the hole for cake
Fakes don’t pay back they stay whack and stingy not great

OrEo da cookie 10-27-04 01:28 PM

^^^^ woders why thats there but nice yall

Dabatos 10-27-04 07:08 PM

thanx uppin
thanx uppin

DrasticMeasureZ 10-27-04 09:18 PM

Blah It Doesn't Make Sense But Its An Good Freestyle Though Nice Rhyming
Good Vocab

Like Tha Rhyme Scheme Tight Homie

Keep Dem Callb'z Coming..............................word

Ysdat 10-27-04 09:23 PM

thnx for the feed.
up^

Dabatos 10-27-04 09:47 PM

uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin

¤ÐÅž¤ 10-28-04 04:45 AM

decent collab, lol @ ya it dont make sense all the time, slant ryhmin was koo though..

Ysdat 10-28-04 01:16 PM

thnx for the feed. upping for more

Dabatos 10-28-04 08:26 PM

up up and away !!!!!!

Chew187 10-28-04 09:05 PM

POtentially Phatt!!! good phrazing I thought it coulda used a stronger core but i liked the old skool vibe it had to it 8/10 :shoot: keep droppin!!!!!


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