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Verbal Phenom vs enygma
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No hate votes Explained votes only Good luck. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-27-04 at 10:04 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
It fucked up, so just check into here...
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enygma has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-04 09:54 AM.
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Verbal Phenom has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-04 09:55 AM.
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This cat's easily trash........enough to overflow a land fill
But Verb keeps words in motion....while his verse is still a stand still This cat bringing fire?.....Well I guess he's got sterno Kid, I'll knock your fucking lights out and have you going nocturnal I'm probably the oldest on this site... ya still need to have protection Cause I'll shove my cane up your ass and give you a staff infection I'm miles ahead.....how dare you try to come spit em with me I mean shit......he writes in small text cause he's got little to see It's over, nighty night.....guess it's time to check out ya whore Can't beat me straight up.....so he tried to make it best out of four |
Ok, heres my 10...
U thinking ur a 'step' a'head' is funny, u a joke, i stomp on skulls for a living None of ya punches r hitting, u blaze a page...readin ma verse 'n' skimming I be the reaper, watch as u try and inhale words of fury, take a breather I'll take out ya speaker, To light up ya life, take rv 'n' spark up the heater You bin here for awhile, but u aint even a vet, more like you were new In this battle, you should already be dead, like the inactivity of ya crew Honestly, this isn't tha life to suitya, take up trombone n get a tutor Kids perverted, he think that playin wit big guns is playtime at hooters Think u a star?, I'm godly wit infinite forms of rap, so u overlooking clouds Don't shout ur verse isn't a big deal, Like tryna find a birthday party clown Explained votes only. |
Voted For: enygma
i give this too enyhma enygma: you still got it..this was a decent verse from you..you got that Godly like structure in your lines..this shit was nice..best line This cat bringing fire?.....Well I guess he's got sterno Kid, I'll knock your fucking lights out and have you going nocturnal that was dope...lol nyce shit your punches hit em hard..personals ..there was none..your structure was decent..flow was good...wordplay was DOPE....vocab...ok....consistancy...good verbal: this shit was Dope too...thing is your punches didnt hit as hard as Engyma's ....your personals..there was none...your shti was ok too Honestly, this isn't tha life to suitya, take up trombone n get a tutor Kids perverted, he think that playin wit big guns is playtime at hooters best line ^ and that was..blah...ok wordplay..not good..structure..good..flow good....vocab...ok...overall this was a decent verse.........but enygma gets my vote |
^aight...thanks for the vote. up-uppin.
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Voted For: enygma
Im doing break down.... Verbal U thinking ur a 'step' a'head' is funny, u a joke, i stomp on skulls for a living None of ya punches r hitting, u blaze a page...readin ma verse 'n' skimming No… not good of an opening wasn’t feeling it… I be the reaper, watch as u try and inhale words of fury, take a breather I'll take out ya speaker, To light up ya life, take rv 'n' spark up the heater This is more of a slef glori.. so no.. You bin here for awhile, but u aint even a vet, more like you were new In this battle, you should already be dead, like the inactivity of ya crew This was iight I gues.. didn’t like the concept Honestly, this isn't tha life to suitya, take up trombone n get a tutor Kids perverted, he think that playin wit big guns is playtime at hooters No… hell no… not good… Think u a star?, I'm godly wit infinite forms of rap, so u overlooking clouds Don't shout ur verse isn't a big deal, Like tryna find a birthday party clown Not good closer Your verse was very weak.. shit.. what happened yo… this is gotta be the worst ive seen from you.. I mean.. the verse you had at writersblock was better.. man…. Not good… Nygma This cat's easily trash........enough to overflow a land fill But Verb keeps words in motion....while his verse is still a stand still Nice opening.. thought a lil rewording could be done This cat bringing fire?.....Well I guess he's got sterno Kid, I'll knock your fucking lights out and have you going nocturnal Not good flow on this… not good concept I'm probably the oldest on this site... ya still need to have protection Cause I'll shove my cane up your ass and give you a staff infection No… not good.. I'm miles ahead.....how dare you try to come spit em with me I mean shit......he writes in small text cause he's got little to see This was iight… the concept was I lil played It's over, nighty night.....guess it's time to check out ya whore Can't beat me straight up.....so he tried to make it best out of four Ok closer … Noty feeling any of your verses… not good punches at all.. infact…there was barely any direct punches… Vote: nygma for a betteer verse…. |
Thanks for the votes.......just upping this some more.
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weerrd. uppin.................
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