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Effect 10-27-04 01:50 PM

Mad Dog Diss
 
Im quick to pit you with pure powerful incoming punches
that piss you off till ya spit shit that only hits like sponges
your just a piss taker but trust me u fat dog ya overated
you wasn't nothin to be popped and then afta cremated
Your shit stinks but you still carry on thinkin your da shit
the bull dog needs his bulls clipped and tied to ya hip
Tryin to diss me mad dog you antient pointless history
you'll still be dissin and i'll be pissin on ya till ya forty
and whats this shit about...... me needing to mature
this bitch got confuzed about his age he an't even sure
you australian asshole your whole face is startin 2 age
your 2 scared 2 battle because u don't wanna help 2 afraid
and you an't paid mad dog your just a a lyric reader penis
and I hope ya read this you'll see mad dog flee and feel this
tryin to take me down but you'll never ever break me down
cause I know ya a dick rider and im not gonna listen 2 no clown (nope)

Zig Zag 10-27-04 02:01 PM

okay that was okay ill give it a 5.7/10 you gettin better man stay up just keep writinthats sthe best theing to do

OrEo da cookie 10-27-04 02:34 PM

the words you have have already been used in like every song, read a dictionary, no hte, thats wat i do

Effect 10-27-04 02:49 PM

no hate oreo SHUT THE FUCK UP

Loveliss Grandz 10-27-04 02:58 PM

it was aight.the dictionary does help tho'.u can neva stop expanding ur vocab as well ass ur mind."shut the fuck up" was uncalled for when it was good advice.

OrEo da cookie 10-27-04 03:00 PM

just shows he could never be a rapper, to many critits

Effect 10-29-04 04:50 AM

dam im wack....


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