I'm bored...........
 

L.Grandz:dear lord,
do you think i could eva make it past them pearly gates n into heaven?

the LORD:"my child first answer me this,what part of ur body have you sinned with?"

L.Grandz:

"what part of my body have i sinned wit?"
i've sinned wit em' all
starts wit my feet,took me where i didnt belong
then theres my arms,though they're small dey strong
when its beef they jackhammers,equipt to bak hammers
out ta' relax gangsta,then i figure probly my eyes
whatevas worst, killin' a nicca or watchin' em die
i guess my finger tips too for fillin' dem clips
palm for pushin' it in,for housin' da gat im includin' my hip
then i guess my mouth an' my lips for talkin' so slick
also my tongue an' my spit for all da blunts dat i twist
hands for grippin da fif, squeezin an' shit
legs for bein' so quik when cops come an' i dip
last there's my dik for stayin up in sumbody's bitch

the LORD:stop my child,thats enough.
"go to hell"

omg boi u r just a writeaholoic damn!!! but a good one at dat...good piece all through tho.....anotha 10/10

thanx ma'.i wanna make it a song now that im readin' it again an' again.should i?watchuthink?

can i get sum feedbak?

kananiccagetsumfeedbak?damn, i gotta beg.