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DirtBoy69 07-02-02 01:16 PM

dirtboy69 vs Pestilence
 
50 points on the line
first to five votes win
or a 3-0 shutout for a k.o
ten line max and verses due tomorrow

here's mine :



This kid is so bitch I caught him sittin down to take a piss/
I’m so confident that I’m gonna beat you that I’m throwing punches with open fists/
Swinging daggers at you to watch you bleed to death with open wrists/
Like a blind man on a target range your punches are a sure miss/
Killing this kid’s verse with a ruler so you know your straight losin/
Like drunk monkeys in straight jackets your punches aren’t abusing/
With every punch I throw this battle approaches conclusion/
Following the trail of losses just find out where you’ve been/
I’d use your name in this verse but that’s been done/
Then again that’s like me winning this battle cause I’ve already won/

DirtBoy69 07-02-02 01:18 PM

and people vote on my other battle it's been going for like almost a week
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=15268

J.T. KNUCKLES 07-02-02 01:59 PM

ANTE UP !!!!! 1:45 ET TIME real quick freestyle
 
I know you swing wit open fists cause you a Bitch//
my lyrical Wits leave yo shit in Deep Space-six//
you submitt like a slave yous a kunta-kinte//
ima press stop on yo shit cause it's been played//
you should of stayed at home cause you Bitch-made//
but now ima spit in yo face like a 12 gauge at yo ribcage//
you cant use my name cause yo shit is all Pre-MADE//
I Cremate you when I spit off this mind of mine//
so ima hit Dirtboy wit my SIX-NINES//
so Dirtboy I must be "Drunk" and blind~ cause I aint really fuckin feelin yo rhymes//1

not long enough battle.
Verses in Vote.1
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Here is a little warning,don't bring attention to your words like that,they were size fucking 15,that isn't needed,don't make your words any bigger than size 1.

Thank You and have a nice day:D

DirtBoy69 07-02-02 07:54 PM

uppin this for votes now

biggdz40cal 07-02-02 08:08 PM

dirt came real ill but you could tell how pest came raw from the DOME!! " Too much Orginization equals wack RAPresentation" vote = pest

DirtBoy69 07-03-02 07:16 AM

uppin this that vote doesn't make much sense but i ain't gonna whine about it so it's 1-0 for the other guy

DirtBoy69 07-04-02 06:31 AM

don't sleep vote on this battle

DirtBoy69 07-05-02 06:48 AM

more votes !!

Mystery~murdera 07-05-02 12:43 PM

Re: dirtboy69 vs Pestilence
 
Quote:
Originally posted by DirtBoy69

This kid is so bitch I caught him sittin down to take a piss/
I’m so confident that I’m gonna beat you that I’m throwing punches with open fists/
Swinging daggers at you to watch you bleed to death with open wrists/


I loved this begginin, that shit was hott. the flow was nice i was feelin both flows, i think pest got the win though, his punches were harder, i don't even know if you countin this vote cuz i am a newbie but if you do i gotta barely give it to pest
vote=pestilence

DirtBoy69 07-05-02 03:23 PM

2-0 for him uppin for the come back

rollindubbs 07-06-02 12:30 AM

a dirt boy some times people see shit different. and i see it YOUR WAY.

dirt
"This kid is so bitch I caught him sittin down to take a piss/"
that took it!!! need I say more


couldn't feel this line:

"I know you swing wit open fists cause you a Bitch//
my lyrical Wits leave yo shit in Deep Space-six//
you submitt like a slave yous a kunta-kinte//
ima press stop on yo shit cause it's been played//"

vote= dirt

DirtBoy69 07-06-02 06:51 AM

2-1 for pest now let's finish this

rar one 07-06-02 08:35 AM

Vote= DirtBoy
 
Feeding off a verse is bitch.. an plus if your gunna feed at least make it ill as fuck..

the "slapping with open fist" part was an ill line.. But i dont feel like quoteing

Dirt came with a better punchs,metas,and rhyme scheme
But barley.. If pest wouldnt have fed i imght have liked his verse a lil more... But yah... Dirt came better

one

k1ll@~m1c 07-06-02 09:22 AM

vote=dirtboy
i wus feelin his punches more he started off betta n da beginin dan pest

~SHELZZ~ 07-08-02 09:21 AM

stupid ass
 
yo Pestilence had tha better verse?
I thought if you go second you spose to feed off your
emcees a little cause you want your verse to be better than theres? am I right?
Quote:
This kid is so bitch I caught him sittin down to take a piss/
I’m so confident that I’m gonna beat you that I’m throwing punches with open fists/

good one so this is how pestlence started
Quote:
I know you swing wit open fists cause you a Bitch//
my lyrical Wits leave yo shit in Deep Space-six//
you submitt like a slave yous a kunta-kinte//
ima press stop on yo shit cause it's been played//


ok more:
Quote:
With every punch I throw this battle approaches conclusion/
Following the trail of losses just find out where you’ve been/
I’d use your name in this verse but that’s been done/
Then again that’s like me winning this battle cause I’ve already won/
aight then pest came back

Quote:
but now ima spit in yo face like a 12 gauge at yo ribcage//
you cant use my name cause yo shit is all Pre-MADE//
I Cremate you when I spit off this mind of mine//
so ima hit Dirtboy wit my SIX-NINES//
so Dirtboy I must be "Drunk" and blind~ cause I aint really fuckin feelin yo rhymes//


like what bigg40 said yo Rappresentation and pest got it
his punches came harder than Dirtboy and it was all freestyle


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